Id's Odyssey

What is self magnified, but life longing an impossible dream, a tickling of inner cravings as the voice of imaged splendor, wherewithal's purpose flourished in veritable endeavors of stylistic appropriations, realistically mediating 'tween desire's yearning amidst clouded vapors dispersing recognition beyond declarations of id's odyssey, an ideal in ego's transformation that which awakens substantial sustenance nourishing a spirited nature, a psychic boon, abstruse or surreal motivating individuality's creative impulses differentiating experience's of uncoordinated instinctual trends amid uniqueness of the ultimate animus, 'roused beyond mind-blowing intrinsic forces

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Robert Warlov

Date: 10/13/2016 11:08:00 AM

Interesting subject, but the conflict is at the intersection of biological drivers and social expectations. "biological trending" is confusing, unless there is a reevaluation of the object. Nevertheless, locally, a fun read.

Paloma P
Date: 10/13/2016 2:33:00 PM

I highly doubt Superego gives a fig about social expectations. Thanks for your thoughts.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/13/2016 10:58:00 AM

And what odyssey this was to read...sort of like a vernacular adventure if you will :^D Nice work! MC

Paloma P
Date: 10/13/2016 2:32:00 PM

Thanks MC, love 'vernacular adventure'! :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/13/2016 8:31:00 AM

Mind blowing is right, did you hear that loud boom? Your words become a whirlwind of beauty and mystical petals swirling about, dictating the forces that push your poetry to the boundaries of thought and reason. This was an extraordinary piece of art.

Paloma P
Date: 10/13/2016 2:30:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind review, thanks Chris!

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/13/2016 4:51:00 AM

Well explained id's Odyssey into the varied realms of sublimation ...

Paloma P
Date: 10/13/2016 5:40:00 AM

Thanks very much Probir.