Amelie Ison Poet Free verse

Identity Crisis

Would you remember me
When there's not much of me left?
When I'm faded,
Like a rock chipped away by erosion.

Would you remember me
When you're almost unrecognisable?
When I don't think I know who you are anymore;
Like a tree that's shed its leaves in winter.

Would you remember me
When the world's spinning starts to slow?
When everything disappears so quickly,
Would you remember me?

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Jeanette Swan May 27, 2024 at 5:51 AM Your poem with it's repeated refrain 'Will you remember me?' creates such a sadness and longing for hope and human bonds of love and friendship. Friendship is precious. J :)