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I have loved my individual self always, With my physique, psyche, flesh, blood, grace, and glaze; Midst my gender and cast, and creed and sex, and sect, How uniquely Nature has formed me beauty decked...! When I go within and find the treasures concealed, Like secrets of fertile land that does richly yield; Virtues and values, venture victoriously, Like angels ascend the heavens gloriously...! Above all, the uniqueness I applaud most is: Compassion and honesty make me a true wiz...! These, like lamps in darkness, lighten my avenues, And brighten my mind and heart with celestial views...!!! 03 March 2023 Writing Challenge - I Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme: Identity

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Date: 4/3/2023 4:33:00 PM
Christuraj, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/3/2023 11:36:00 PM
An interesting poem to make you think. I spend a lot of time looking at my flaws and fretting. However if I take your poem and have a similar word with myself, I'm actually quite alright. A poem that encourages positive self assessment - congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/15/2023 10:15:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/3/2023 7:53:00 PM
Love the way you have assessed yourself. I can ratify that you are essentially compassionate and honest. I don't know your form. One who takes pride in his own identity is able to espect other's identity too. Well done Chris. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/15/2023 10:15:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/3/2023 7:09:00 PM
Christuraj, I enjoyed reading this poem and you should be proud of your identity, from what I read Nature definitely has formed you beauty decked. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:15:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/3/2023 12:01:00 AM
luminous poem, made me happy while reading an d commenting, thanks yann
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/3/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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