Ideas Begin To Percolate

Ideas begin to percolate
They pop out of me in bubbles
Floating out the window
Stopping traffic
One hesitates
Apparently feels badly.
Changes directions and floats back.
I pop it and reptile, banana, and Grand Canyon fall out.

A blue banana riding a pink reptile 
At the Grand Canyon float into my dendrite field.
The banana whips out an I-phone and begins taking selfies.
In the tiniest voice she says “You won’t believe where I am”.
“Where?”
“In someone’s head.”

Rhymes begin floating out of another part of my brain.
The rhyming part. I have a phrenologist bust. 
I look at it but do not see any area labelled rhyming
So what good is it?
The rhymes are singing now, in a lilting sing-song way.
“I will get them!” the blue banana yells.

She begins chasing the rhymes.
She brought two back.
Scramble and Bramble.
I snatch up verdant, perceptibly and goose as they float by
Or maybe these are just my floaties.
I am unclear now.  Is this real or another dream? I shut my eyes.

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Date: 8/24/2019 3:50:00 AM
Woah woww you had me floating in your clever imaginative super cool muse in bubbles. Your muse floats swell and when you snatched verdant my fav word I was glad to read of it. My mind chases rhymes too but your idea is creatively said. Kudos! Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2019 6:35:00 AM
I am so glad I pulled verdant out of my hat now! Thank you! You write like Shakespeare. Only better.
Date: 8/23/2019 3:49:00 PM
bubbles... hehe... I love bubbles... This is so fun. "Blue Banana"... I love Bananas... haha (and write about them)... Keep your eyes open, even in dreams...at least sometimes. The colors change and swirl. Hugs my friend. I loved this one for sure. Ann (side note, excellent article about poetry. There was no where to leave a comment. So I penned it here... or tapped it, or wrote it, or?...hum) Excellent.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2019 6:34:00 AM
Thank you so much. I am on a big "roll" this week for ideas are following me around and laughing at my consternation during the day. For some weird reason, I am grabbing them and putting them on post-it notes for later.
Date: 8/23/2019 1:40:00 PM
I think your vacation needs a vacation... (LOL) real busy in thought (LOL) Write on this is a righteous clever verse James
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2019 6:33:00 AM
I was on vacation and not feeling a bit good the whole time. I am still suffering, but luckily school keeps me so busy I am not feeling sorry for myself because I am too busy!
Date: 8/23/2019 1:14:00 PM
What inspires you, is beyond me...Your ability to write so much poetry, your imagination and creativity...Wonderful...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2019 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I am just doing it to entice my husband into seeing how clever I am in my old age. Ha!
Date: 8/23/2019 10:18:00 AM
Such creativity! Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2019 6:32:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I may have to read it myself now.
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