Idealism

The snow becomes slush
its whiteness is gone,
it turns into rain
as people in grief.

Passing sails glide
like gondolas
in old Venice,
no lover sings.

Can sunset
bring surprise,
happiness...
with real hope?

Gladness
isn't found
here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 15, 2010 at 12:20 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Andrew.Rgds Brian & best wishes with this one.
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February 13, 2010 at 10:34 PM
Wonderful Hexaverse...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
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February 13, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Very thought-provoking, Andrew. We were filled with an idealistic hope last year when our new president took office. Now it seems like the hope is gone. Not blaming Obama. We just had stars in our eyes thinking anyone could deliver on all the promises that were made. You have a gem here, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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