I'D Save That Dear Brother of Mine

Dear God, he doesn't trust me, And that's where our relationship fell apart, My brother moved to drugs, And I followed my heart. I betrayed him, and I was the last That he ever thought would. Dear God, he won't forgive me, I've destroyed us for good. If I could, I'd go back in time, And remove this fairytale, I'd save that /dead/ brother of mine, I'd save him from his hell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 14, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Excellent writing, your voice shines through
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