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I'D Like To

I'd like to go to the stars or scan the deepest oceans. And explore the planet Mars, guided by my emotions. I'd like to fly through the sky, chasing rainbows, droplets spun. And give ballooning a try, floating free under the sun. I'd like to trek, desert-sands or the jungles of this world. And visit exotic lands in tall ships with sails unfurled. I'd like to pause time on earth, and rewind it to my youth. And drop in on Jesus's birth, separating myth from truth. I'd like to repay the love and loyalty of my friends. And know that God rules above before I die and life ends. (Quatrain) 1/2/2016
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Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 4:44 PM
I love all three top stanzas, Emile. Awesome.
Pinet Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thanks so much Line, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Shahein Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 6:29 PM
Remarkable write my friend, great choice for the words ...glad I've stopped by to read it....hugs / / :) dalia
Pinet Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Thank you Dalia, your comments are most welcome and I am so glad you stopped by. Emile.
Manassian Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 4:38 PM
There is beauty in every stanza, dear. Great write....if only...
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Eileen, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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