I'D Fill My Mind With Golden Trees

I wandered lonely as a cloud
in open space of the blue sky.
For my graceful flight I was proud,
but I didn’t know in the least why.
My life had become so lonesome
for I floated far from my home.

On wings of southern breeze I flew
over tinted vales of flower,
till I reached the yonder plateau,
bathed in the bright sunshine shower,
painting of autumn I could see
on color-clad tree canopy.

To glide on boughs I got a chance,
feel the rhythm of their rhapsody,
as leaves in wind began to dance,
ripple of joy flowed within me.
While colors glowed in my shadow,
spellbound I saw a splendid show.

My lone journey would end someday,
I won’t forget the thrill I’d felt.
To the sky’s edge I’d drift away,
in twilight of despair I’d melt.
At night when for me time would freeze,
I’d fill my mind with golden trees.

(Inspired by : "I Wandered As A Lonely Cloud" by William Wordsworth)

February 1, 2020
Syllable count : 8 each line (as in the inspiring poem)
Rhyme scheme : ababcc 
Contest : Your Rhy-Me
Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Kauffman Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sublimal. All the best.
La France Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 9:39 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2020 at 4:19 AM
This poem is so BEAUTIFUL Subimal. Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! xxoo A Fave for me.
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, very well deserve. Hugs eve
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February 3, 2020 at 7:16 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - greetings from // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 11:49 AM
great imagery in your wonderful write... congratulations on your top win :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 7:46 AM
Love the final verse! So much emotion! Congrats, Subimal, on first place!
One Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 6:34 AM
This line inspired a lot of people.. you did well to write to a syllable count with good rhymes.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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