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Cloaked it in a bit of Personification just for fun.

On the tips of our leaves, a slight touch a whisper to make us all blush as it riffles our tresses with icy caresses our limbs going stiff as we submit to Autumn’s red faced pall. ©8/23/2019 Autumn or September or October Nonet Poetry Contest Caren Krutsinger - sponsor

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Date: 8/25/2019 5:31:00 PM
Superb job with this challenge. Love it.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/28/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, as always you and your comments and input are always appreciated
Date: 8/23/2019 9:48:00 AM
Simple and beautiful!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/28/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you, I strive for simple ..... but then these finger things just go crazy......
Date: 8/23/2019 8:57:00 AM
Really nice John. Very picturesque and wonderfully Autumn.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/28/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thanks Chris, been chasing two toddlers all week, a joyous exhaustion.

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