Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Icky, Yucky, Sucky

ICKY, SUCKY, YUCKY
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 wheezing, sneezing; allergy in my throat
darn green mucus pasted in my hair,
steroids tumbling down on  chest
and  “no- bath -for -days”  anywhere!

mites and dust in  rinsed fingernails
fever flushing  through these  dead toes,
and whacking sinus  drips much yuckier
floating from my  from dry , red nose!

emergency rooms now daily visits for me
oxygen masks, x-rays and tests for  clean piss ,
yipers, my new honey's  coming  around to check 
this surely sucks, don’t wanna be kissed!!




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*Egad! If my allergy doesn’ clear up, hafta be confined , really! …Sucks!




Nancy Jones’ Things that Suck Contest
By: allergy monster—nette

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Gwendolen Song October 15, 2011 at 8:32 AM Nette--Are u no better yet? I hate this situation for you. You might have to change your pen name to "Sneezy or Wheezy". Hang in there...oh the rainy season. So sorry. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown October 11, 2011 at 10:52 AM Congratulations on your poetry placing in Nancy's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 10, 2011 at 10:33 PM Congrats Nette luv on another magnificent win with this super awesome entry .. wow wonder.. winning whiz... wunderbar.. enjoy with luv my friend..

Nancy Jones October 10, 2011 at 10:25 PM Dang, netteski... wrote ya a heartfelt comment on this one and guess the captcha code flummoxed me... anyhow, what i conveyed in the now cyberspaced away comment is.... sorry ya feel sucky and wish i had a sure cure... all i can say is ginger and garlic work good for me.. as does SLEEP. love the way ya write, love the soul ya shine, glad your dancin' feisty through this worlda mine. Digya sis~N

Russell Sivey October 9, 2011 at 12:03 AM Awesome! You did terrific on this poem nette! I get allergies as well and they can be severe enough that I have been in the emergency room due to the extreme symptoms! I hope you get feeling better! Outstanding write, you should place high in the contest of Nancy's!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 8, 2011 at 4:28 PM oh so feel for u Nette luv.. one of my sons suffers with allergies so bad..maybe this bad as u so aptly wrote of.. it is something that sucks..for sure..good luck in the contest... u detailed the majority of the symptoms my friend..wow..

Cyndi Macmillan October 8, 2011 at 12:59 PM PPS--- feel better soon! Allergies DO suck. Yours sound severe!!!!

Cyndi Macmillan October 8, 2011 at 12:58 PM You crack me up. One minute writing something that would make concrete melt into a gooey puddle, the next minute you actually penned clean piss and green mucous in the same poem. One-of-a-kind you! :-) Sent you a soup mail, can you respond whenever you have a moment? PS- check the last line of stanza two here. I think either a word is missing or an extra word was inserted. Cheers chum- hugs Cyndi

Kash Poet October 8, 2011 at 9:52 AM Nicely rhymed poem here Nette.Hope you will be soon fully cured.I do suffer from these things time to time and have to take puffs..I know it Sucks.

Tony Lane October 8, 2011 at 7:41 AM Do you know what you need. I can't believe that I get to say it, you need a nette pot. Get one today and alergies go away. Tony

Lee Ramage October 8, 2011 at 1:56 AM Great poem, I feel so bad for anyone with allergies, take care. Lee