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Icing On The Cake

The Pelican flew Right, quick turn left.. icing on The windshield.. gracious

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Date: 3/17/2010 9:40:00 AM
It's a funny Haiku. I like it. Congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:05:00 AM
I never had that one done 2 my car..Enjoyed...
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:16:00 PM
Yes , Sara, another fine Haiku of yours and really funny! Keep your pen flowing! And thank you for your welcome comments... My email address is now in facebook...Gert
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:06:00 AM
If not only for the mess they leave, the acids are pretty strong in birds stomachs, and they can stain paintwork on cars. Kool Haiku Sara >> James
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Date: 3/6/2010 1:18:00 AM
Geez. Don't you hate it when you go outside in the morning, noticing that their are hundreds of bird poop on your car. there is a nest on top of my roof.lol how lucky is that. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/5/2010 10:11:00 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Sara. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2010 6:57:00 AM
Wow! There are so many things to be grateful for and this is one of them, dear Sara!! Great Haiku! Thank you for reading and leaving your encouraging comment on my poem! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/5/2010 5:56:00 AM
hmmmmm hot and cold! lots of speed too! Light & Love
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Date: 3/5/2010 5:31:00 AM
Catchy title. I thought about food at first. Great write!
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Date: 3/5/2010 4:21:00 AM
This was good enjoyed it lots Daniel
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Date: 3/4/2010 9:41:00 PM
oh, MY, that is GOOD (I like 'em painted dark!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:11:00 PM
Wonderfully funny.. it happens in N.J. too.. a wonderful title to your Haiku Sara... luv ready funny right before sleep...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/4/2010 5:46:00 PM
Cute Haiku Sara...enjoyed...Marty
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