Icing On the Cake

The Pelican flew 
Right, quick turn left.. icing on
The windshield.. gracious
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 17, 2010 at 9:40 AM
It's a funny Haiku. I like it. Congratulations. Ernilando
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March 15, 2010 at 9:05 AM
I never had that one done 2 my car..Enjoyed...
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March 13, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Yes , Sara, another fine Haiku of yours and really funny! Keep your pen flowing! And thank you for your welcome comments... My email address is now in facebook...Gert
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March 7, 2010 at 8:06 AM
If not only for the mess they leave, the acids are pretty strong in birds stomachs, and they can stain paintwork on cars. Kool Haiku Sara >> James
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March 6, 2010 at 1:18 AM
Geez. Don't you hate it when you go outside in the morning, noticing that their are hundreds of bird poop on your car. there is a nest on top of my roof.lol how lucky is that. -Always&Forever Lynette
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March 5, 2010 at 10:11 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Sara. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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March 5, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Wow! There are so many things to be grateful for and this is one of them, dear Sara!! Great Haiku! Thank you for reading and leaving your encouraging comment on my poem! Peace, love, Audrey
Guzzi Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 5:56 AM
hmmmmm hot and cold! lots of speed too! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 5:31 AM
Catchy title. I thought about food at first. Great write!
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March 5, 2010 at 4:21 AM
This was good enjoyed it lots Daniel
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March 4, 2010 at 9:41 PM
oh, MY, that is GOOD (I like 'em painted dark!) Luv, Andrea
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March 4, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Wonderfully funny.. it happens in N.J. too.. a wonderful title to your Haiku Sara... luv ready funny right before sleep...luv.. Linda-Marie
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March 4, 2010 at 5:46 PM
Cute Haiku Sara...enjoyed...Marty
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