Icing

my love; last night while you drifted curled within my arms my thoughts grew full-bloom, beneath the moon. on white sand we melted together into passion's splash like dripping candles atop birthday cake and i wished you awake! 10/21/2012...my birthday :)

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/23/2012 4:18:00 PM

First Happy Birthday. (Sorry a few days late) 2nd you write from places that only true poets reach. So proud to read your work. Hugs and a kiss on the cheek Michael

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/23/2012 5:45:00 PM

Thank you :) Your comments are always so sweet! hugs

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/21/2012 11:23:00 PM

There is something desperate in this emotional poem of wonderful images and sensual sentiments Sandra - J.A.B. %

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/23/2012 5:46:00 PM

Thank you Justin!