Icing

my love;
last night
while you drifted
curled within my arms
my thoughts grew
full-bloom, beneath the moon.

on white sand
we melted together
into passion's splash
like dripping candles
atop birthday cake

and i wished
you awake!




10/21/2012...my birthday :)
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Falotico Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:18 PM
First Happy Birthday. (Sorry a few days late) 2nd you write from places that only true poets reach. So proud to read your work. Hugs and a kiss on the cheek Michael
Adams Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Thank you :) Your comments are always so sweet! hugs
Bordner Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:23 PM
There is something desperate in this emotional poem of wonderful images and sensual sentiments Sandra - J.A.B. %
Adams Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Thank you Justin!
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