Icicles

crystal chimes of night
their tune carried through the wind...
dawn breaks in silence

December 16, 2019

Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu
Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper

December 26, 2019 at 6:51 PM

Congratulations on your very descriptive win, Sandra! Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams

December 26, 2019 at 10:12 PM

Thank you so much Eve... hugs

Constance La France

December 26, 2019 at 5:34 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your beautiful haiku ~

Sandra Adams

December 26, 2019 at 10:12 PM

Thank you so much for hosting the contest, as well as the win...i hope you had a wonderful holiday :) hugs

Peter W Iversen

December 26, 2019 at 9:43 AM

Very nice, congrats-peter

Sandra Adams

December 26, 2019 at 10:31 AM

Thank you so much Peter... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 25, 2019 at 2:31 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Sandra :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

December 25, 2019 at 9:34 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise... Merry Christmas and Happy new year to you my friend :) hugs

Sam Kauffman

December 24, 2019 at 12:19 PM

Sandra, Congratulations. This is beautiful and so creative. I love the image of the icicles as music.

Sandra Adams

December 24, 2019 at 3:46 PM

Thank you so much Sam... hugs :)

Juliet Ligon

December 17, 2019 at 4:21 PM

This is really clever, Sandra! A fav for me!

Sandra Adams

December 17, 2019 at 7:11 PM

Thank you so much Juliet...especially for the honor of a fave :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

December 16, 2019 at 8:11 PM

Nice contrast at dawn. And so often true! (Soup mail, please. Thanks).

Sandra Adams

December 16, 2019 at 8:32 PM

Thank you so much Gershon... hugs

Line Gauthier

December 16, 2019 at 8:08 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams

December 16, 2019 at 8:32 PM

Thank you Line... hugs

Andrea Dietrich

December 16, 2019 at 5:11 PM

wow, probably the best one I have seen for the "turn" at the end. Mine did not have much of one!!!

Sandra Adams

December 16, 2019 at 7:10 PM

wow... thank you Andrea, that means something coming from you...you pen this form rather well... hugs

Na Na

December 16, 2019 at 3:43 PM

Great Haiku. U did well. Best of luck in the contest Sandra

Sandra Adams

December 16, 2019 at 7:09 PM

Thank you so much Greg... hugs

Running Wolves

December 16, 2019 at 3:27 PM

Very nice haiku. Just so you know I changed my name to RunningWolves because I write under that name on another site as well and some of my friends from there are here too on soup. But I'm still Robert Maguire. Sorry for any confusion this may cause.

Sandra Adams

December 16, 2019 at 7:09 PM

Thank you for letting me know... :)