Icicles

crystal chimes of night their tune carried through the wind... dawn breaks in silence December 16, 2019 Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 6:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your very descriptive win, Sandra! Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/26/2019 10:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve... hugs

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2019 5:34:00 PM

Sandra, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your beautiful haiku ~

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/26/2019 10:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for hosting the contest, as well as the win...i hope you had a wonderful holiday :) hugs

Peter W Iversen

Date: 12/26/2019 9:43:00 AM

Very nice, congrats-peter

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/26/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Peter... hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 2:31:00 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Sandra :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/25/2019 9:34:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise... Merry Christmas and Happy new year to you my friend :) hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/24/2019 12:19:00 PM

Sandra, Congratulations. This is beautiful and so creative. I love the image of the icicles as music.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/24/2019 3:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam... hugs :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/17/2019 4:21:00 PM

This is really clever, Sandra! A fav for me!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/17/2019 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Juliet...especially for the honor of a fave :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/16/2019 8:11:00 PM

Nice contrast at dawn. And so often true! (Soup mail, please. Thanks).

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 8:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon... hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/16/2019 8:08:00 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 8:32:00 PM

Thank you Line... hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2019 5:11:00 PM

wow, probably the best one I have seen for the "turn" at the end. Mine did not have much of one!!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:10:00 PM

wow... thank you Andrea, that means something coming from you...you pen this form rather well... hugs

Na Na

Date: 12/16/2019 3:43:00 PM

Great Haiku. U did well. Best of luck in the contest Sandra

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Greg... hugs

Running Wolves

Date: 12/16/2019 3:27:00 PM

Very nice haiku. Just so you know I changed my name to RunningWolves because I write under that name on another site as well and some of my friends from there are here too on soup. But I'm still Robert Maguire. Sorry for any confusion this may cause.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:09:00 PM

Thank you for letting me know... :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2019 1:47:00 PM

Lovely sights and sounds of winter, Sandy--all the best.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:09:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/16/2019 12:27:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful my friend. Such an enchanting little piece that paints a wintry picture that makes the reader smile. Best wishes in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/16/2019 7:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris...your kind words always make me smile :) hugs