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Icicle Hours

Icicle slow hours

     Elongated frost dials

Dripping silver time 


2/18/21

timewinterhaiku

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

May 14, 2021 at 10:08 AM

"Icicle slow hours" Sharp, witty, you've mastered compaction of gem.

Sara Kendrick

April 16, 2021 at 3:28 AM

I like this one. I can see someone looking out a window quite often eyes lifting from the pages of book. Enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for dropping by . Sara

Juliet Ligon

March 21, 2021 at 5:06 PM

This is really clever, and time seems to be frozen in the winter. A fav for me!

Jennifer Proxenos

March 6, 2021 at 11:59 AM

An Ice storm sounds really frightening to us in South Africa who only see snow once in about 10 years. Your homes must be built accordingly to keep the cold out and the warmth in. Very expressive, impressive Haiku Michelle. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.