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Icicle Hours

Icicle slow hours Elongated frost dials Dripping silver time 2/18/21

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Date: 5/14/2021 10:08:00 AM
"Icicle slow hours" Sharp, witty, you've mastered compaction of gem.
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Date: 4/16/2021 3:28:00 AM
I like this one. I can see someone looking out a window quite often eyes lifting from the pages of book. Enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for dropping by . Sara
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Date: 3/21/2021 5:06:00 PM
This is really clever, and time seems to be frozen in the winter. A fav for me!
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Date: 3/6/2021 11:59:00 AM
An Ice storm sounds really frightening to us in South Africa who only see snow once in about 10 years. Your homes must be built accordingly to keep the cold out and the warmth in. Very expressive, impressive Haiku Michelle. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:14:00 PM
Icicles will drip only if the temperature is high enough. Good little write.
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Date: 2/24/2021 9:23:00 AM
Beautiful haiku!
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:56:00 AM
Super snapshot, Michelle. Drip, Drip, Drip. Take away the D and you've got RIP, Icicle. Cheers, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2021 8:01:00 PM
We just had a big ice storm here, with some very looong icicles! Thanks for commenting, gw :)
Date: 2/19/2021 10:36:00 AM
Like the bunny, they just keep on dripping! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2021 8:02:00 PM
And dripping ... and dripping ...
Date: 2/19/2021 4:51:00 AM
Love it... God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2021 8:03:00 PM
Thank you, Gina~

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