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Iceberg - Haiku

jagged meringue peaks
etched on steel blue frosted skies
perilous splendor


Liz Reilly

naturehaiku

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Kim Merryman

March 21, 2012 at 3:49 PM

Great imagery, Liz. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 6:09 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Liz. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2012 at 5:06 PM

wow, I noticed below, I had faved this one a long time ago. It remains splendiforuous!!! Congrats again.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 16, 2012 at 8:52 PM

congrats Liz on an awesome win for these splendid words of Haiku luv..

Ralph Taylor

March 16, 2012 at 8:11 AM

Congrats, Liz. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2012 at 10:52 PM

liz, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Andrea Dietrich

February 18, 2012 at 9:41 PM

oh my gosh, this is OUTSTANDING a FAVE for this. Just love the last line. love ALL of it.(congrats in Brian's contest, but i"d have given it first place)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 16, 2012 at 10:08 PM

congrats Liz on winning an HM for another great writer luv..

Sara Kendrick

February 16, 2012 at 2:51 PM

Great caliber..The descriptiveness is excellent..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 15, 2012 at 9:15 PM

Congratulations, Liz! Amazing haiku. Blessings, Rhonda

Samual Ronthorpe

February 15, 2012 at 4:09 PM

Liz, where do I start with this one. I write a lot of Haiku's and this one is wonderful. Form wise, it's spot on. You have both the 'season' and 'cut' words. You use highly descriptive words and paint a complete picture. This is what a Haiku should look like, in my humble opinion. Outstanding job. Congrats on winning HM in Brian's contest............................S.Ronthorpe