Ice Skating

I skate
with date

not ready
unsteady

cling rail
would bail

afraid
my maid

would skate
He-mate

leave rail
act male

fall down
I frown

but she
helps me

cling arm
no harm

we skate
up late

let go
oh no!

spill cup
helps up

red face
no race

to rail
still male

take home
not nome

miss
kiss

high school
now fool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Murray Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 12:05 PM
So this is a footle? You fool to lose your cool. Silly boy.
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 12:53 PM
- Sweet ......
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