Ice Maiden

The Ice Maiden marches on gelid toes through the weeks she wanders and goes to all and every house each day leaving sparks of sparkling gray. She comes your way moving fast leaving the whirling wind aghast, at her pace it can’t keep going too much longer before it quits blowing. When she is gone and the trees covered in ice, her job replete she leaves a slice of her sweet frosting for those who find her kiss too cool, remember Who designed her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 2:21 PM
A beautiful maiden spreading ice wherever she goes...a lovely picture your poem paints, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 5:34 PM
Thank you Ann. This is one of my favorites. I appreciate you reading and commenting! :)
Hawley Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Almost like a person your diacription is. Good job. Going to follow your work now.
Fowler Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Miranda. I'm honored. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 2:50 AM
Such imagery that I'm sure will earn you a high placement.
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Thank you dear Victor. hugs :)
May Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 12:26 AM
Well done my friend you did bring magic to this poem!
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Many thanks Bobby. I welcome your kind comment! :)
Daniel Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 4:22 AM
This is delightful, Linda, sure to place high:)
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Jo. One hopes... :)
Goff Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 3:56 AM
Linda, you've captured perfectly God's Magic Presence! so lyrical too! you possess great talent!
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 6:30 AM
I am warmed by your words James. Many thanks for the encouragement. :)
Miller Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 3:05 AM
A delightful poem Linda
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Many thanks Terry :)
Villalon Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:47 PM
Cool! :)
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 6:29 AM
Thanks Clifford!
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