Ice Love

Holding you
makes me shiver
makes my cells burst.
I want to keep you for long
you keep me awake
you excites me.
But there's no forever
slowly...
you're drifting from my grip
melting away from me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vaso Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 1:41 AM
In the middle of winter, I like how you wrote this! :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 11:24 AM
Yep! ice does melt. It only last a short time. I like this poem Charmane. Bellen.Have a nice daqy my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 11:25 AM
have a nice day my friend.
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