Ice King

I am a wimp-wuss whose pain threshold is too low I want my mommy… By Tim Ryerson For SKAT's Ice King Contest I actually held the ice cube until it started melting...about 5 minutes then I had to go to work thank god...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2013 11:14:00 AM

Congrats on your uniquely creative winning work.Sara

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/21/2013 4:54:00 PM

very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/19/2013 8:32:00 PM

Finally, one to make me smile..congrats to you. BG

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/19/2013 6:09:00 PM

Ha ha, cute. Congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2013 4:54:00 PM

nice win.... PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2013 2:15:00 PM

- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Tim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 8/19/2013 2:02:00 PM

HI TIM, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/19/2013 10:02:00 AM

The comment below is the best part of your work... But loved it all.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/6/2013 7:11:00 PM

Hahaha, Mr Funny Man. Good luck for the contest, my friend. A cracker, for sure. Licia :-)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/6/2013 6:49:00 PM

OK, so there is something about hanging on to an ice cube. I wanted to thank you for your precious comment. I feel like I stumbled on an inside joke, but I am a dense fool sometimes!

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 8/6/2013 11:29:00 AM

† Poor Precious Babies So Priceless, Their Innocent Tiny Heart's. But Amid 'This World,' Joey Bravo Wants Everyone To Be As A Stud Because, It Serves His Agenda Well ? Until One Day Bobby Sox Jimmie Comes Along With Her Banner And His Gong ? Interesting My Dear Friend, This Ice King ? Cool Poe, And Thank You For Your Kind As Inspiring Visit. Love, John