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With a silence that cut through the laughter
She entered the room, bitterness
Edged around her features, portraying
Cruelty with an unfeeling sword of darkest
Gloom, dread so dismal it feels, almost,
Like grief sinking into the bones
Sullenness coughing up phlegm that rots
In the heart, the soul, the mind
Where there is a penetrating hostility

Her eyes glared at the laughing children
Echoed cynicism through the air
Like a poison dart piercing the heart
Her hatred tasted of a sourness
Only the very truthful could attest to

She was hard and her icy stares forced lovers
To pull away from one another, chastised
By the coldness that left chills on the mind
Resentment fell from her pores, sweating acidity
Imploring hope to be cast aside for disaster
Calamity so dreadful it was as fatal as a stab wound
A trepidation so repulsive with its awfulness
It feels like being in a nightmare, 
Terrifying

When she looked at me, though…
I saw through the cool, calculating gaze
Into the heart where there had once lived 
A child of five, all giggles and smiles
Alive with the joy of silliness, …
I saw, beneath the ice in the veins
The warmth of a heart who was living
… with excruciating pain 




Pick-A-Title, Vol 30 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh 
1.) Ice In the Veins
April 24, 2022

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Date: 5/30/2022 7:43:00 AM
"I saw, beneath the ice in the veins The warmth of a heart who was living" - your writing has this spiritual depth. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/29/2022 4:20:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this spectacular poem, Regina:-) Wow, what a chilling, powerful piece! This one's a keeper. Faved.
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Date: 4/25/2022 9:07:00 PM
This poem penetrates through the icy chill of her heart into something that was so warm and glowing once. The bitter experiences of life must have made her so venomous and unfeeling. Now she has become a boiling cauldron of hatred ! Very deep probing into the psyche of a tortured human being ! Great write, Gina
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