Ice Dream

Frosted mist glides down Highlighting polished glass orbs Crystal bedecked boughs

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Christi, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! (I love the word bedecked.) Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:38:00 PM

That's so nice: crystal bedecked boughs. A big congratulations to you! andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations on #4 Christi, Agape, Moses

Thomas Kurdyla

Date: 3/4/2010 9:44:00 AM

Christi, this is a wonderful one and fits the spirit of the form more than most! Congrats!, Tom

Linda Witt-King

Date: 3/3/2010 11:24:00 PM

Well done Christi. You've created a word picture of the photo quite beautifully. Congratulations.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:34:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/3/2010 7:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:04:00 PM

congratulations on your high placement win Christi!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 11:53:00 AM

Christi, your haiku is a visual delight and I am so glad to see you in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:28:00 AM

Christi, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 8:47:00 AM

Lovely indeed. Congratulations. Love, joyce

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/3/2010 8:11:00 AM

this is a delightful haiku, conjures up a favulous picture Congratulations, Déirdre Ó Maidín

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 3/3/2010 6:44:00 AM

Congrats!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:26:00 AM

Congrats Christi on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win..enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Christi. Love,Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/3/2010 3:10:00 AM

Vivid description in this haiku, Christi. My congratulations to your winning in this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:36:00 AM

Christi, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2010 11:08:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Christi. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol