Sotto Poet Poet Limerick

Ice Cream Rebellion in the Sun

Written: June 27, 2025, for contest: Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Mirage suggested on the run
"Hydrate or be well-done, my son"
The ice cream rebelled,
The sunflowers yelled—
And the night couldn't outshine the sun!

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Jennifer Proxenos June 29, 2025 at 2:42 AM Love this clever Limerick. Temperatures are reaching unlivable heights, and yet we have to survive - motto - keep hydrated, or suffer the symptoms of dehydration and land up in ER. Really enjoyed this short poem Lasaad. Hugs and blessings JENNIFER.

Paige Hind June 28, 2025 at 11:02 AM Awww, so cool, Sotto!!

Sally Eslinger June 28, 2025 at 10:20 AM Oh how true! Just yesterday i had to go to E.R. for Dehydration? Thanks for this smile sender!

Valsa George June 27, 2025 at 9:22 PM "Hydrate or be well-done, my son"--- great advice when summer is at its peak. Wonderfully done limerick. All the Best dear Lasaad!

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2025 at 5:00 PM Live that last line. Also clever personifications

Sara Kendrick June 27, 2025 at 12:52 PM Creative one with good rhyme, rhythm and flow. It reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara K