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Ice Cream Rebellion in the Sun

Written: June 27, 2025, for contest: Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin ************* Mirage suggested on the run "Hydrate or be well-done, my son" The ice cream rebelled, The sunflowers yelled— And the night couldn't outshine the sun!

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Date: 6/29/2025 2:42:00 AM
Love this clever Limerick. Temperatures are reaching unlivable heights, and yet we have to survive - motto - keep hydrated, or suffer the symptoms of dehydration and land up in ER. Really enjoyed this short poem Lasaad. Hugs and blessings JENNIFER.
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Date: 6/28/2025 11:02:00 AM
Awww, so cool, Sotto!!
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Date: 6/28/2025 10:20:00 AM
Oh how true! Just yesterday i had to go to E.R. for Dehydration? Thanks for this smile sender!
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Date: 6/27/2025 9:22:00 PM
"Hydrate or be well-done, my son"--- great advice when summer is at its peak. Wonderfully done limerick. All the Best dear Lasaad!
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Date: 6/27/2025 5:00:00 PM
Live that last line. Also clever personifications
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Date: 6/27/2025 12:52:00 PM
Creative one with good rhyme, rhythm and flow. It reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara K
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