Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Ice Cream

It's so hot this afternoon 
Pink tongue sticks to silver spoon
Ice cream melts despite the cherry
I drool to cool dish with strawberry.

My brunch made is hot fudge cake
With ice cream in the middle 
And a grand strawberry milkshake
So tasty that makes me giggle

And the entree fried ice cream 
with fried pickles to dip 
All so very cooling for teeth
The sweetness stays on my lip.

 
7/2/2022
ICE CREAM POETRY CONTEST
Sponsor Julia Ward

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James Fraser October 5, 2023 at 9:24 AM A yummy write to a wanting tummy, and Ice Cream shall appease, mmm, nice :) Karen Jones October 5, 2023 at 10:06 AM Thanks James!

Gordon Mcconnell December 9, 2022 at 11:10 AM Lovely penning Julia, with nice imagery and good line of thought. Blessings,Gordon Karen Jones December 9, 2022 at 11:20 AM Thanks

Harry Horsman December 9, 2022 at 1:14 AM Reading this has a two way effect, Karen, makes me feel hungry, and the poetry is good. Harry Karen Jones December 9, 2022 at 2:42 AM You are kind to read and thanks Harry.

Michael Tor July 8, 2022 at 8:37 PM Nice to know how Rico feels lol. I enjoyed reading about this combination of fried pickles I havent tried but Im sure it taste great. God bless you Karenand thanks for commenting on my Tribute to Connie... Karen Jones July 9, 2022 at 9:03 AM Rico is a riot! lol You are so welcome and thanks for stopping by Michael.

Rico Leffanta July 3, 2022 at 11:41 AM Naught to worry as lots of sex in the afternoon and evening will burn up buns and thigh calories! Aloha! Karen Jones July 3, 2022 at 11:54 AM Rico! Lol

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 3, 2022 at 5:38 AM Wow! Delightful and mouth-watering! Enjoyed your scrumptious poem, Karen. Thanks for dropping by. Really appreciate. Karen Jones July 3, 2022 at 5:52 AM Thanks for reading and your support Malabika!

Beryl Edmonds July 3, 2022 at 4:43 AM Your hot fudge cake with a strawberry milkshake sounds simply delicious. A delightful ice cream read Karen. All the best… Belle Karen Jones July 3, 2022 at 4:50 AM Thanks for stopping by and for your kind comments Belle!

Brian Sambourne July 2, 2022 at 9:43 PM Delightful! There is so much to savor + long for in this posting of mouth watering indulgences. Best of luck in the contest. You've given readers a feast of summer treats. Cheers, Brian Karen Jones July 3, 2022 at 3:30 AM So glad you stopped by Brian. Now if only those treats were fat free! Lol oh well. Thanks!

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 2, 2022 at 9:38 PM Your poem is a real treat, Karen, and an ice cream lover's dream. Good luck in the contest. :D Karen Jones July 3, 2022 at 3:28 AM Thanks for your support Evelyn!