Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Tanka

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- Ice Cold Thoughts -

Frozen ice crystals
                                 The moon are meant to glisten
                                       Dressed from tip to toe 
                                The darkness and pain followed
                                  What a madness in this world








26.011.2018
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Susan Ashley December 13, 2018 at 10:20 PM Your exquisite poem is expressed with artistry and beauty, Anne-Lise. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2018 at 3:13 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David William Breidenthal December 11, 2018 at 5:23 AM I agree with Warren completely! You did a great job, writing this lovely poem Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2018 at 12:36 PM - Thank you very much, J.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll November 29, 2018 at 11:46 AM From the beauty of nature to world madness in 5 lines. So well written and unique, Anne-Lise. Sending a big warm hug your way~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2018 at 2:06 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 28, 2018 at 2:40 PM ohh, love how this ended, anne... may life treat us well especially on a season that blows too cold... lovely...huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2018 at 2:05 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2018 at 6:05 PM Nice way to put words to that awesome picture, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2018 at 1:12 PM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso November 27, 2018 at 4:26 AM I came to read this again, maybe is a "northern" thing! :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2018 at 4:30 AM - The world is cold ... both of ice and human feelings, Arthur :) - Always nice to see you :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu November 26, 2018 at 8:23 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, this photois beautiful. Winter can be beautiful sometimes. Bare trees are dressed with snow or freezing rain ice. have a nice evening my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2018 at 1:11 PM - Thank you very much, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 26, 2018 at 6:18 PM madness sure gives it the frozen touch excellent pen dear friend i pray you have a blessed week anne lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2018 at 1:11 PM - Thank you very much, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire November 26, 2018 at 3:34 PM Never let the madness get you down, Sunshine. The joy you spread on Poetry Soup makes this a wonderful place to participate. This is a beautiful tanka, dear. Hugs, Carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2018 at 1:11 PM - Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France November 26, 2018 at 9:58 AM Sun, beautifully penned, and your image is wonderful too ~ Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 2:06 PM - Thank you very much, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 26, 2018 at 9:14 AM Wonderfully written my friend. In every joy a little pain is found. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 2:06 PM - Chris, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy November 26, 2018 at 8:31 AM Well-done depiction of contrast, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 2:05 PM - Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands November 26, 2018 at 7:34 AM Wow this is great Ann-Lise! Very well written :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 2:04 PM - Heidi, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit November 26, 2018 at 6:53 AM Apt portrait of the photo in your words..wonderfully depicted Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 2:04 PM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 26, 2018 at 4:21 AM beautifully penned Anne-lise:-) Happy Monday:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 5:42 AM - I was out before 06:00 this morning .... dressed from tip to toe ... terribly cold - Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 26, 2018 at 3:38 AM So true Sunshine, beneath the beauty lurks the madness in our world. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 5:38 AM - Even behind the madness ... beauty exists - Small ice crystals that shine an early Monday morning, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 26, 2018 at 3:36 AM I was lucky in this...crazy world to witness this phenomenon many times here and in Canada. First time though depicted in poetic form dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 5:35 AM - Demetrios thank you very much, it feels like the North Pole :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mahtab Bangalee November 26, 2018 at 3:33 AM crazy beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 5:33 AM - Thank you very much, Mahtab :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso November 26, 2018 at 2:50 AM Madness yes, but such a beautiful photo! Loved the poem! Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2018 at 5:32 AM - Thank you very much, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)