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Ice Breaker

Her hands appeared empty at my first glance I walked in her direction for a look A little bit shy but I took a chance I then noticed she was holding a book When she looked in my eyes my insides shook I gathered my courage to say hello Would she talk to me I really hoped so I was so thankful she treated me nice Her mannerisms were easy and slow Seeing that book helped me to break the ice Inspired to try this form by Russell Silvey. Thanks for the explanation Russell

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/28/2015 11:30:00 AM

Interesting.....icebreakers are useful

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/28/2015 11:41:00 AM

Hi Eileen, thanks for reading one of my older ones. I haven't seen Russel in quite a while.

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/19/2015 7:39:00 AM

There is nothing sexier than a lady with a book, I like it ;)

Casarah Nance
Date: 11/19/2015 11:44:00 AM

well i want to read that poem next xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/19/2015 10:06:00 AM

I can think of a few things sexier, *lol*!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2013 8:48:00 PM

Not sure the form but I think you did it VERY well. I like how the ice breaker was a book!

Colleen Bono

Date: 7/1/2013 2:11:00 PM

writing isnt even a challenge for you anymore is it?I thought a turd in the grass was one noone could make sound good but you did.Love Colleen

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 5:09:00 PM

Thanks Collen, sometimes easier than others. Still a challenge.

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/1/2013 8:21:00 AM

Awesome inspiration & topic! Break that ice because, sometimes, the sun just isn't strong enough to melt it on its own. ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 5:09:00 PM

I like that thought Drake.

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/30/2013 11:16:00 PM

You have done a very good write using this form! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! You have painted a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 6:55:00 AM

Thanks Russell for introducing me to a new form.

Donna Jones

Date: 6/30/2013 9:27:00 PM

Richard what a lovely poem and man you are too love your sweetie so...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 6:55:00 AM

She makes it easy.

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2013 7:10:00 PM

great ice breaker poem. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2013 6:56:00 AM

My pleasure, thanks for commenting.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/30/2013 6:25:00 PM

Really???? A book did the trick? Well, who would have guessed. I thought it was a cup of coffee???? ;) So...you looked into her eyes and your insides shook? Are you sure? Or was it the other way around? ;) Teasing ya! Great write, Richard. I must try some new forms....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2013 8:08:00 PM

I knew it was fictitious, Richard...that was my attempt at banter...I answered your post on When You Say Nothing at All....Perhaps that will explain....Of course you wouldn't notice the book if your sweetie was wearing a bikini....To be able to still pull that off is amazing....Sure you are proud if her!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2013 6:31:00 PM

This is not a real life encounter but fit the feel of the piece. I was not nervous when I met my sweetie, perhaps that is what things flowed so effortlessly between us. Mind you she was reading a book but I didn't notice as she looked amazing in her bikini. Still does.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2013 6:26:00 PM

Yea....I read posts as well! ;)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/30/2013 5:49:00 PM

Ahh yes Richard!...Reminds me a bit of my first encounter with my lovely, late wife!...I would say you did this form quite well indeed - Tim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2013 6:26:00 PM

Thanks Becca, an angel is on it's way to your home.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2013 6:25:00 PM

Thanks Tim, so sorry for your loss my friend.

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 6/30/2013 11:52:00 AM

Ice breaker ! Nice plot. How are you Richard? I hardly get time to concentrate on a poem. To night I felt that I should read some poems of my dearest Friends. I will soon write .

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/30/2013 11:58:00 AM

Hello Manell so glad to see you. Let me know when you post another poem, I would not want to miss it. Hugs Rick.