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Ice Funeral

ICE     FUNERAL


My River Smolenka has been free of ice now for weeks, but today 
I saw the flat smoothly-flowing river  steaming   grey  - 

Bearing  remnant  ice-floes from some upper tributary stream,
Small, weak, lifeless, their former  life a dream:

An  ice funeral cortege  - silent slow  black calm steady
All floes going to die - each melts, reunited with its parent substance  like souls unready. 

Each drops its load of dirt and cigarette butts and beer bottles  - purified.
Only by the stuff it has dropped  is  its shabby existence  testified.

Smolenka is their Styx  - their frozen  wastes will never  return;
Unmourned by watchers on the bridge,  who turn

Aside like all the rest
In  disinterest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/27/2011 9:04:00 AM
Very cool the way the remnants of icefloes as well as the litter are purified in the Smolenka's water. A great analogy on the progression of life toward its inevitable purification! The lat two lines are quite compelling -- we all hope to be remembered but that occurs only as long as those who knew us hold us in their hearts. Love, Carolyn
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