Ice

lake frozen to ice skating rink for little ones ~ fish swim underneath 28th December 2022 Syllables: 5.7.5 (www.howmanysyllables.com) For Tania Kitchin's "Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku" contest

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 5:03:00 PM

Jo, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great imagery. Many blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/5/2023 10:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I can picture this. Way tooooo cold. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/5/2023 3:36:00 AM

Jo, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Valsa George

Date: 1/1/2023 4:11:00 AM

You have depicted the winter scene in Buffalo and Erie. Many lakes are frozen there. Beautiful haiku.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/30/2022 3:28:00 AM

Perfect haiku. Wishing you all the best.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/28/2022 10:01:00 PM

A cheerful winter scene, I can almost see their pink noses! Best of luck with the contest~

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2022 5:27:00 AM

I can vividly bring to mind this winter scene, Jo, and hear the excited squeals and laughter of young children! ~ Sending you wishes for a New Year filled with love, peace, blessings and good health. // paul