Joanna Daniel Poet Haiku

Ice

lake frozen to ice
skating rink for little ones ~
fish swim underneath




28th December 2022


Syllables: 5.7.5 (www.howmanysyllables.com) 


For Tania Kitchin's "Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku" contest

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Eve Roper January 5, 2023 at 5:03 PM Jo, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great imagery. Many blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith January 5, 2023 at 10:15 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I can picture this. Way tooooo cold.  Have a blessed day writing away...............

Tania Kitchin January 5, 2023 at 3:36 AM Jo, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Valsa George January 1, 2023 at 4:11 AM You have depicted the winter scene in Buffalo and Erie. Many lakes are frozen there. Beautiful haiku.

Victor Buhagiar December 30, 2022 at 3:28 AM Perfect haiku. Wishing you all the best.

Michelle Faulkner December 28, 2022 at 10:01 PM A cheerful winter scene, I can almost see their pink noses! Best of luck with the contest~

Paul Callus December 28, 2022 at 5:27 AM I can vividly bring to mind this winter scene, Jo, and hear the excited squeals and laughter of young children! ~ Sending you wishes for a New Year filled with love, peace, blessings and good health. // paul