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Ice-Capped Hillsides

the ice-capped hillsides are mirrored through the bright lens of tiny swallows HAIKU in 5 7 5 only - Volume 1 Sponsor: Poet Doctor. The 7/6/2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/8/2018 7:01:00 PM

Imagery pops off the page, Nette.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2018 10:07:00 PM

Pretty!

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/7/2018 12:26:00 PM

Just lovely Nette, best wishes in the contest...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/7/2018 1:19:00 AM

With this heat wave we having your poem was even more enticing!!! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/6/2018 10:39:00 PM

I am enchanted by the beauty of your haiku, Nette. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 9:14:00 PM

Even in three lines I can feel your breath in a write. This is wonderful, Nette!

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/6/2018 10:30:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Nette ... Thank you for liking my haiku The Rejoicing Past ...

John Lawless

Date: 7/6/2018 9:24:00 AM

Beautifully done Nette.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/6/2018 7:13:00 AM

Lovely poem, nette..best for a win.

Lyva Marty

Date: 7/6/2018 5:08:00 AM

Interesting haiku with an unexpected last line! Birds' have keener sense during this season. Thank you for compliments!

Virginia Waters

Date: 7/6/2018 4:36:00 AM

So Beautiful - love always- V