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I am to him a Stradivarius, a treasured violin His bow expertly caresses my supple strings My body moans when tucked beneath his chin Revving to his rhythmic pulse, my heart sings I am the delicate ivory he strokes on his keyboard his adventurous fingers roam over me in staccato Those romantic interludes he's adeptly scored accompanies intimacy to the point of crescendo I am the mouthpiece on his golden saxophone Our blues brings about passion and lustful desire From a distance I hear the pitch of a lone trombone Emotions build with the heat of a roaring wildfire Across the well worn bridge of his idle acoustic guitar I yearn for the virtuoso's touch to strum my chords But there's no harmony, although we've come so far No gliding glissandos found at the tips of drawn swords Now he plays mournful melodies on a native Hopi flute Reflecting our lives in every wistful and somber note We're both lost, wandering like phantoms in pursuit of lost love. We're adrift without oars or sail for our boat With each wave a tear falls as I lay sheltered in the bow He sits astern listening to music whistled by the wind staring at the far horizon with worry etched on his brow Is this, I wonder, punishment for those who have sinned

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Date: 3/1/2018 7:43:00 PM
Hello Lin, I like the classical music,violin and harp and piano. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/9/2018 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful, yet so very sad, Lin. What a pity when two hearts are not able to make music together any more! ~ I wrote a similar poem called 'viola' not so long ago; still unpublished and only a few lines long. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/9/2018 9:41:00 PM
Merci, Paul. I look forward to reading your 'Viola.'
Date: 2/7/2018 3:50:00 AM
A stunning masterpiece Lin! Straight into my Faves! I loved it! : )
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Date: 2/9/2018 9:40:00 PM
Many thanks, Connie. Your comments are always so kind.
Date: 2/5/2018 10:38:00 AM
Lin, such a wonderful poem about the lifespan of love; you expressed this so well. I often wonder how two people so in love can let it slip away. John
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Date: 2/5/2018 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, John. It happens when one places more importance on something other than that love, and then we can wonder how deep was a commitment that should've been unbreakable.
Date: 2/3/2018 3:53:00 PM
beautiful imagery and gorgeous language in this mournful poem, lin. a wonderful write!
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Date: 2/3/2018 4:16:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind words, Ilene.
Date: 2/3/2018 3:37:00 PM
I am absolutely speechless as to what to say except WOW WOW WOW amazing poetry Lin ... into my faves!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/3/2018 4:16:00 PM
Well thank you, Jan. This one started in one direction and then memories took it down another path.
Date: 2/3/2018 12:19:00 PM
Oh, this is wonderful, Dear Friend ... this speaks to me on so many levels - music, romance, creative metaphor, phrasing, metre - I adore this one, and must fav! Absolutely gorgeous, and one of the best I've read in quite a while! :-) <3
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:51:00 PM
Thanks very much for the comments and faving, Greg. They're always greatly appreciated when given by a 'poet'.
Date: 2/3/2018 11:53:00 AM
Sadly, every song has an ending. Wonderful poetry, Lin, as always. However I would venture to say, I'll bet you are a Stradivarius with the sweetest sound:)
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:49:00 PM
Hiya, Danny. Thanks for the wonderfully sweet compliments. It's great to see you and hope it means you're feeling much better.
Date: 2/3/2018 11:00:00 AM
Wow Lin, simply amazing
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Date: 2/3/2018 12:48:00 PM
I like your "wow," Tim. Thanks ever so much for liking this one.

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