I Write Your Name

I write your name in the sand 
but the water washes it away
I write your name in the sky 
and the wind blows it away
I write your name in my head
and my other thoughts push it away
I write your name in my heart 
and forever it will stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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May 8, 2026 at 6:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 13, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Brittney Armour, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Brittney, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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