I Write

If you could only see the world the same way that I do,
You would have to see that it has a crowded view.

Bits and pieces of random things that to me seem inviting,
Get included as elements into the play that I am writing. 

You complain that you’ve told things to me but I say I’ve never heard,
While an old Twilight Zone has dialogue that I’ll remember word for word.

And sometimes at night a smile will come across my face,
As I run lines in my mind until I figure out the pace.

Would it drive you nuts to know that there’s a stage inside my mind,
Where actors are working diligently on a set that I’ve designed?

And I know the worst part of it for you, the thing that you really dread,
Is when our son will start to laugh as he watches cartoons in his head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 4:42 PM
VERY fluid and cool poetic thoughts!
Tor Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 12:52 AM
Awesome! It will always re-echo in my mind. Tor.
Susan Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 9:47 AM
you have a unique way of seeing things. I like how you portrayed them as a conversation with your wife. very realistic and awesome to picture a stage in your mind. your ending couplet is excellent - perfect for this story! the future awaits... :P
Severin Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Thanks a lot for your nice comment, your poetry is very inspired and expresive.
Onclaud Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 10:07 PM
spaekling runnnig commentaries that swim in your head.. eow, greeeat! :) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 10:08 PM
*sparkling*
Devonshire Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Tony, those lines that run through your head are running through mine as well. Guess we get a lot of fragmented thoughts. Sometimes lines from a play I was in will come back to me with no provocation. I LOVE the last couplet!! Your son is only showing his creative imagination if he laughs at the "cartoons in his head." Like father, like son. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 6:42 AM
Very good write my friend....Michael
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