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I writ it, re-writ it settled back and said “I did it!” I posted it When It was done Said “I’ll not write Another one.” I sat ecstatic Feeling drowsy Relieved cuz no one Called it lousy. My pencil said “you’ve hit your mark” “now go and hang it In the dark” The critics “faved” But here’s the rub I listened to that pencil stub now my poems ride on the wind without beginning without end John G. Lawless ©8/15/2022

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Date: 8/16/2022 4:02:00 AM
This is amazing... I love it. God bless you friend, Love, Gina
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 8/16/2022 4:30:00 AM
You might be just having fun but it is adorable and creative, a venture in delight!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2022 4:19:00 AM
Thanks Gina, just having some fun with Milton's poem regarding "lousy" poems
Date: 8/15/2022 8:40:00 PM
I have so many that have a beginning but no ending. Critics can be cruel, but I have a keen sense of discerning that you don't give a darn what they say, and you shouldn't. You don't really use a pencil, do ya?
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John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2022 4:21:00 AM
ya, don't ya love it when the muse starts running and then forgets where it was headed...
Date: 8/15/2022 7:08:00 PM
Heh-heh. They ought take the lead out of pencils. They really should. ~ Just sayin'
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2022 1:32:00 PM
I'd be happy just to get the lead out of my butt, truth be told...
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John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2022 4:20:00 AM
well they got it out of the gas and look what happened....
Date: 8/15/2022 6:20:00 PM
enjoyed these echoes from the void
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John Lawless
Date: 8/16/2022 4:22:00 AM
some things you just can't "a void"....hehehehe

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