I Would Never Raise My Child Like That

She had all kinds of suggestions.
I was raising my children incorrectly.
She could not stop giving me ideas.
She had never had children of her own,
but I pretended to listen.
My children groaned when they saw her coming.
Made themselves scarce, which gave me a little break.
Ten years later when she had her own children she apologized
for all of those "I would never.'s" because she told me that she has now.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 10:07 AM
How often this is the case. Advice--good and bad--is readily available until one needs some advice oneself.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 12:34 PM
My girlfriend said it "horrified" her how bossy she had been with me after she had her own children and realized it is not the same as watching others do it.
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