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I Would Find a Miracle

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You let me open up; about some things I felt were so damn hard Oh, that day it was cold; each and every rain drop felt like a shard Thank you for walking beside me, seeing more than an emotional bard Never once did you wrong me; safely listened to how life's left me scarred You know It didn't take much to notice Your arrows; my bullseye; you seldom miss When I held you close; I gave you a glimpse; I hoped you'd feel it pure and whole Not only did you meet my requited needs, but you offered to console I just needed you to find me openly bearable; I had no idea; that I would find a miracle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/17/2023 2:18:00 PM
Wow! Stunning.
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Date: 11/17/2023 3:32:00 PM
Thank you very much! Regards A.S.
Date: 11/17/2023 2:17:00 PM
Wow!
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:17:00 PM
Wow!
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:17:00 PM
Wow!
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Date: 11/17/2023 2:17:00 PM
Wow!
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Date: 10/20/2023 5:16:00 PM
This is tender and romantic. I enjoyed the warmth, word choice, and rhyme. Love is a miracle!
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Date: 10/20/2023 5:26:00 PM
We are all birds in the same flock, thank you for the warmth Karen! Best regards A.S.
Date: 10/16/2023 3:27:00 PM
A very beautiful and loving rhyming verse, A.S.! You just keep growing!
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Date: 10/17/2023 8:40:00 AM
Appreciating your supportive words as always Paige! Warmest Regards A.S.
Date: 10/16/2023 1:13:00 PM
It’s a miracle when you are accepted and loved for who you are! Too often.people want you toe the line. You described the day, the feelings with such expertise. AS. Such moments live in our hearts forever. Treasures, that a no be erased. Pangie xxx Pagie.
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Date: 10/17/2023 8:38:00 AM
I do thoroughly appreciate the care in which you give to your responses. I love reading the descriptions of how someone views my work. It is part of the reason that I put a concerted effort into giving good replies. Cordially A.S.

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