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I Would Find a Miracle

You let me open up; about some things I felt were so damn hard
Oh, that day it was cold; each and every rain drop felt like a shard
Thank you for walking beside me, seeing more than an emotional bard
Never once did you wrong me; safely listened to how life's left me scarred 
You know It didn't take much to notice
Your arrows; my bullseye; you seldom miss
When I held you close; I gave you a glimpse; I hoped you'd feel it pure and whole
Not only did you meet my requited needs, but you offered to console 
I just needed you to find me openly bearable;
I had no idea; that I would find a miracle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Wow! Stunning.
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November 17, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Thank you very much! Regards A.S.
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November 17, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Wow!
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November 17, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Wow!
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November 17, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Wow!
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November 17, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Wow!
Jones Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 5:16 PM
This is tender and romantic. I enjoyed the warmth, word choice, and rhyme. Love is a miracle!
Scorpio Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 5:26 PM
We are all birds in the same flock, thank you for the warmth Karen! Best regards A.S.
Hind Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:27 PM
A very beautiful and loving rhyming verse, A.S.! You just keep growing!
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October 17, 2023 at 8:40 AM
Appreciating your supportive words as always Paige! Warmest Regards A.S.
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October 16, 2023 at 1:13 PM
It’s a miracle when you are accepted and loved for who you are! Too often.people want you toe the line. You described the day, the feelings with such expertise. AS. Such moments live in our hearts forever. Treasures, that a no be erased. Pangie xxx Pagie.
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October 17, 2023 at 8:38 AM
I do thoroughly appreciate the care in which you give to your responses. I love reading the descriptions of how someone views my work. It is part of the reason that I put a concerted effort into giving good replies. Cordially A.S.
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