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I Won't Give Up

I some how feel numb I am hearing and seeing but I can't move a crumb, My body lays motionless to avoid the pain I tell my self it is all in my brain, How did I get this bad in such a short time I was fine then the Doc said; oh you have two spots the size of a dime, So I fight and say give me the chemo to keep me alive I know in my heart there is no hope for me to survive, But, my mind is still full of positive thoughts This is what I needed due to how I have fought, I cannot give up and just let go Then I will for sure never know, How long I would have had if I don't give in No matter what happens I will keep fighting till the end. Written By: Unique Poetry 2009: Wrote for my sister Cheryl whom fought Breast Cancer for 7 years at a stage 4 and she was 53....RIP..

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Date: 3/13/2015 1:09:00 PM
If that's not poetry, then I don't know what is. Keep writing!
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Michelle Born
Date: 3/13/2015 1:32:00 PM
well I really miss my sister and I guess writing it down some how makes me heal..even after 6 years almost...xoxo's...UP
Date: 3/12/2015 2:05:00 PM
Very nice. Poetry is a balm for pain and grief, a search for peace.
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Michelle Born
Date: 3/12/2015 5:03:00 PM
Thanks I try..and write from my heart...I know I am no Poet but I try...XOXO'S....UP