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I Wonder Where I Will Be

When you are old and the smooth lines on your face have been replaced with longer harsher ones I wonder where I will be When you are old and the soft bright look your eyes had have long since been exchanged with a fading dimness I wonder where I will be When you are old and time has stolen from you the vitality that now so excites me I wonder where I will be When you are old and gray rocking in a chair in front of a window on a lazy sunday afternoon I wonder if the mid day sun will still light upon your pilgrim soul and should I be there with you will I, with my own fading eyes, look over and remember how it use to be when we where young or will I still be so taken with you and you with me that all we see is the beauty and the grace and the love that can only be shared between two kindred souls? When you are old I wonder where I will be

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Date: 8/31/2013 9:44:00 PM
Brady, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda
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Brady Perkins
Date: 9/2/2013 2:10:00 PM
I missed it there but I believe you. Hopefully it was enjoyed.
Date: 8/13/2013 10:12:00 AM
Hello new member Brady !- Well done, poem. :) - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/12/2013 9:01:00 PM
ps... I read your comment on Skat's comment... Star Wars Rules... haha... How about giving my contest a try. I hope you enjoy it here on the soup... Linda
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Brady Perkins
Date: 8/12/2013 9:12:00 PM
I did already actually. Not sure if it was the kinda thing you were looking for but I hope you enjoy it.
Date: 8/12/2013 8:59:00 PM
Hello Brady, a lovely look into true love.. A wonderful wonder that will keep you connected to your soulmate.. , -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@......
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Brady Perkins
Date: 8/12/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thanks I hope we stay connected, her and I, but only time will tell. I look forward to getting to know youand again thanks for the welcome.
Date: 8/12/2013 5:59:00 PM
Hi Brady, after reading this nice and uplifting poem, I know you will still be in the arms and heart of your kindred lover... love the poem, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* Skat *
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Brady Perkins
Date: 8/12/2013 7:48:00 PM
Thank you, Skat, that was nice of you. I am still getting use to the website as it is a little arcane but I have read comments and I think I will enjoy the community here. Poetry has always been a hobby and an escape for me so I look forward to sharing and reading what other people have to share. Star-Trek huh? I grew up more with Star-Wars myself but I do like both and have been watching the best of TNG on netflix.

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