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what my parents are doing now that they’ve been in Heaven for over 30 years did they get the mortgage paid or did they have to refinance for an upgrade to a bigger cloud do they have a good retirement plan maybe they’re taking that ‘Haunt the universe’s most fantastic places’ cruise they’ve always dreamed of perhaps now they’ll have time to garden and spend more time with the grandkids

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Date: 3/21/2025 3:47:00 PM
Seriously, time down here is the preparation for the time up there. We pave the way for what awaits us...
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Date: 3/19/2025 11:40:00 AM
- ... no mortgage ... and definitely upgraded to a bigger cloud ... and glad they don't have to babysit :))) - Love your funny thoughts, Jerry :) - hugs
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/21/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thanks < my friend.
Date: 3/19/2025 10:29:00 AM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, I do not think they will spend time with the grand kids. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2025 11:39:00 AM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, it could be possible. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/21/2025 9:03:00 AM
You're probably correct although it would be possible.
Date: 3/19/2025 8:50:00 AM
Seems a stab to the heart, at the end. Always! Always make time for the grandkids!! Hugs and Blessings, Jerry!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/21/2025 9:00:00 AM
Always.
Date: 3/19/2025 7:34:00 AM
"upgrade to a bigger cloud" and haunting the Universe. What fun afterlife lines. Great poem. Thanks for sharing! You made my day!
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