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I Wished Upon a Paper Moon

I wished upon a paper moon ~ I wished upon a paper moon and fell among the stars Was whisked away to somewhere good a place just where you are Along a winding riverbed below a willow tree With fireflies to light the way, a path for you and me We laughed as if the world were new amazed within this scene Of lily pads and dragonflies the two of us did dream Holding hands and skipping stones the ripples came to shore Magically they disappeared as we called out for more Reflections on the water played in wavering design You pointed to the middle where a heart shape you did find And then you whispered in my ear my wish had now come true Out here beneath this paper moon in love, just me and you Good night Soupers Have a great weekend

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Date: 12/4/2018 4:08:00 PM
Like a fairy tale...a heart in the middle of the river...ahh
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Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thanks again Kim. :)
Date: 12/4/2018 1:48:00 PM
Oh...Paper moon you never perched as beautiful from the evening sky.Oh rippling drops what a mirror reflecting a heart you did make.Oh poet,what a painting you have painted with your melodious words.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2018 2:02:00 PM
And she leaves me a beautiful poem in my comment box that I accept as a wonderful gift. Thank you Charmaine, you are always so nice to me.
Date: 12/3/2018 7:55:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this touching poem earlier, Chris. You created a magical afternoon for two young lovers to share. I especially liked the way she noticed that heart shape forming in the water!! Beautifully written, Chris! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn for your wonderful comment. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 12/3/2018 3:30:00 PM
Wow I think that is very good. I like reading poems just like yours Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much Julie for your kind comment. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/2/2018 8:06:00 PM
Chris , enjoyed reading this this wonderful well written romantic poem that arouses strong emotions because of its beauty.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I am happy you liked it.
Date: 12/1/2018 9:13:00 PM
Exquisitely crafted, sending hearts (including mine) soaring. Perfect elixir for a good night's sleep. We love you, my friend. Sleep tight! Best wishes always, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:20:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 12/1/2018 11:48:00 AM
- This poem melts on the paper ... so sweet and lovely, Chris :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise
Date: 12/1/2018 10:40:00 AM
Chris, so beautifully penned, so romantically sweet, you are an awesome writer, well done ~
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart. I am thrilled you liked this one
Date: 12/1/2018 9:42:00 AM
ahhh, so romantic. well, can't say good night back to you. now 'tis morning!!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for your kind thoughts
Date: 12/1/2018 8:01:00 AM
Beautifully written. I can relate to everything in it. So nice, Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. :)
Date: 12/1/2018 1:35:00 AM
Hi Chris, you are a poet of "excellence" what a beautiful love story and what a kind heart you must have to poetically string verse after verse to finally reveal a soft and loving music like finale! Well done Chris. An amazing poem. Best wishes, Jennifer
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 11/30/2018 10:57:00 PM
Dreams are meant to leave you breathless, and this is a breathtaking dream. Wishing upon a Paper Moon is perfect. When you are in love. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Many blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy for always being so kind to me
Date: 11/30/2018 8:04:00 PM
Sigh...oh, so romantic...just the kind of experience I would love to have... lovely, just lovely.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/3/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Sherry for your kindness

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