I wish you would moooooove on

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7/21/25

you remind me of a fly on a pile of poop … always smearing dirt such a nasty vache you really gets on my 'teets' ~ silence is golden!

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David Kavanagh

Date: 7/22/2025 3:11:00 PM

Well you know what they say Jan, if you’re going to step on a pile of poop make sure you kill a few flies in the process, (no actually I just made that up) A beastly piece of work here, now I’m off before I put my other foot in it lol! Cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2025 3:27:00 PM

lol David, thanks for the giggle, do drop by Anne-Lise's poem which was inspired by this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2025 11:52:00 AM

- :))) .... a lot of gas emissions ... moooooove on :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2025 12:03:00 PM

yeah, its a very 'taxing' situation as you know lol! hugs Jan xx

Anne Winter

Date: 7/22/2025 6:06:00 AM

Wow, this is so funny! I can't stop laughing! The title is soooooo funny. Thank you the laugh

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2025 6:27:00 AM

Thanks Anne, I'm glad you mentioned the title - that took longer to think up than the poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/22/2025 1:33:00 AM

Always a funny poem. Loved it. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/22/2025 6:27:00 AM

It's so good to see you back Victor, you have been missed. Hubby had radio therapy last week, we are home for a week then go back for 3 more sessions, then hopefully the treatment will be over, but we are never complacent its been going on since 2013 but as you know we live life to the full! hugs jan xx