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7/21/25

I wish you would moooooove on

you remind me of
a fly on a pile of poop …
always smearing dirt

such a nasty vache
you really gets on my 'teets' ~
silence is golden!

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Bj Legros Kelley

July 27, 2025 at 6:40 PM

Very mooooving poetry Jan!

Jack Horne

July 26, 2025 at 5:59 AM

LOL, hmmmm, I wonder who this is about... She's probably read it & seething, the stupid cow : )

Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2025 at 3:52 PM

That's a good funny one, Jan

Jan Allison

July 24, 2025 at 4:02 PM

thanks Andrea, you know how much i love my poopy poems lol I got inspired seeing the picture on an old poem lol, so glad I inspired Anne-Lise and she got POTD :-) hugs jan xx

Abdullah Alhemaidy

July 24, 2025 at 8:30 AM

LOL, It must be blue fly :-) hugs AA xx

Jan Allison

July 24, 2025 at 8:38 AM

lol thanks Abdullah:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Willason

July 22, 2025 at 5:13 PM

OK...where did this bit of inspired humour come from. Did it just fly by or did you step in it. Good stuff my dear Jan. Trying to remember where I've seen the cow before....I guess it's name ain't "Buttercup". Cheers

Jan Allison

July 24, 2025 at 8:38 AM

lol Paul I love your witty reply. I've used the picture several times in the past and my poem inspired Anne-Lise's POTD yesterday:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

July 22, 2025 at 3:11 PM

Well you know what they say Jan, if you’re going to step on a pile of poop make sure you kill a few flies in the process, (no actually I just made that up) A beastly piece of work here, now I’m off before I put my other foot in it lol! Cheers David

Jan Allison

July 22, 2025 at 3:27 PM

lol David, thanks for the giggle, do drop by Anne-Lise's poem which was inspired by this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2025 at 11:52 AM

- :))) .... a lot of gas emissions ... moooooove on :) - hugs

Jan Allison

July 22, 2025 at 12:03 PM

yeah, its a very 'taxing' situation as you know lol! hugs Jan xx

Anne Winter

July 22, 2025 at 6:06 AM

Wow, this is so funny! I can't stop laughing! The title is soooooo funny. Thank you the laugh

Jan Allison

July 22, 2025 at 6:27 AM

Thanks Anne, I'm glad you mentioned the title - that took longer to think up than the poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

July 22, 2025 at 1:33 AM

Always a funny poem. Loved it. Hugs.

Jan Allison

July 22, 2025 at 6:27 AM

It's so good to see you back Victor, you have been missed. Hubby had radio therapy last week, we are home for a week then go back for 3 more sessions, then hopefully the treatment will be over, but we are never complacent its been going on since 2013 but as you know we live life to the full! hugs jan xx