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I wish upon a star tonight to be where you are. When you passed from this life you left a scar. I remember kneeling by your bed each night as you slept. You were sleeping like an angel but did not wake so I wept. I would love to be where you are even if it would be for just a while. There is an ache in my heart to see your blue eyes with your smile. My love and devotion to you have always been forever strong. I am still here stuck in this life, but I hope it will not be long. I love you with all my heart and you were my life’s song. I have missed you so much baby since you have been gone. I look up to the sky tonight knowing you are far. I am singing you an old love song with your guitar. There are tears in my voice crackling as I sing your song. I love you more, and I hope it's not going to be too long. Edward J Ebbs - October 17, 2015

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Jay Narain

Date: 4/24/2023 10:58:00 AM

Gee, terrific poem, well written, emotional with deep feelings.

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/5/2019 8:55:00 AM

This poem is very well written. The loss of a love one is so very hard. May God grant you the peace and comfort you so greatly deserved.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/19/2016 8:55:00 PM

Sad, very sad....

Paul Callus

Date: 10/22/2015 4:30:00 PM

This is very touching, Ed. She is gone, but her memory is vivid, and she is truly missed. ~ Take care my friend. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2015 11:55:00 PM

- Really beautiful and deeply moving poem, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rainbow Promise

Date: 10/21/2015 9:54:00 PM

A 7 for this well-penned poem. Your words "flew" off the page with heart-felt determined passion! Sorry for your lost if this is true. I just lost a loved one myself. Take care.

Constance La France

Date: 10/21/2015 11:25:00 AM

Edward, so sadly beautiful, oh I know this pain well, a tearful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, forever entwined...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/21/2015 8:04:00 AM

gentle but really loving in a sad way.... ~Olive Eloisa

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/18/2015 12:29:00 PM

Poignantly beautiful. Would be hard for the reader not to be touched. I am. This could be a great lyric for a song.

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/18/2015 6:29:00 AM

Amazing poem full of sorrow and sadness, I'm sorry 4 ur lost if this is a true story and not fictional we all have lost dear Pearsons it's hard .... But nice work my friend u know how to create beautiful, touchy poem with simple words..... I felt every word....