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I Wish Upon A Star

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I wish upon a star tonight to be where you are.
When you passed from this life you left a scar.

I remember kneeling by your bed each night as you slept.
You were sleeping like an angel but did not wake so I wept.

I would love to be where you are even if it would be for just a while.
There is an ache in my heart to see your blue eyes with your smile.

My love and devotion to you have always been forever strong.
I am still here stuck in this life, but I hope it will not be long.

I love you with all my heart and you were my life’s song.
I have missed you so much baby since you have been gone.

I look up to the sky tonight knowing you are far.
I am singing you an old love song with your guitar.

There are tears in my voice crackling as I sing your song.
I love you more, and I hope it's not going to be too long.

Edward J Ebbs - October 17, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 1/5/2019 8:55:00 AM
This poem is very well written. The loss of a love one is so very hard. May God grant you the peace and comfort you so greatly deserved.
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Date: 5/19/2016 8:55:00 PM
Sad, very sad....
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Date: 10/22/2015 4:30:00 PM
This is very touching, Ed. She is gone, but her memory is vivid, and she is truly missed. ~ Take care my friend. // paul
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Date: 10/21/2015 11:55:00 PM
- Really beautiful and deeply moving poem, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:54:00 PM
A 7 for this well-penned poem. Your words "flew" off the page with heart-felt determined passion! Sorry for your lost if this is true. I just lost a loved one myself. Take care.
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Date: 10/21/2015 11:25:00 AM
Edward, so sadly beautiful, oh I know this pain well, a tearful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, forever entwined...
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Date: 10/21/2015 8:04:00 AM
gentle but really loving in a sad way.... ~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 10/18/2015 12:29:00 PM
Poignantly beautiful. Would be hard for the reader not to be touched. I am. This could be a great lyric for a song.
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:29:00 AM
Amazing poem full of sorrow and sadness, I'm sorry 4 ur lost if this is a true story and not fictional we all have lost dear Pearsons it's hard .... But nice work my friend u know how to create beautiful, touchy poem with simple words..... I felt every word....
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