I Wish To Be

I wish to be the gentle breeze
Sweeping tearful eyes
Of the weary midday flower.
Or to be the horrid shadow
Casting fearful darkness
For a passer-by to rest.
A rippling river of white
I wish to be the one
Drenching thirst of arid earth.
Or to be a dancing wave
Of the mighty sea
Playing with a child.
A guild of fleeting clouds
Hiding splendid sun
For a homeless soul,
Or the canopy of green
Thwarting rain for a home,
I wish to be the one.
I wish to be a cresset
Guiding glimpse of hope
In the prosaic paths of pangs
Or to be a firefly
In the dim toilsome journey
Of a soul to his divine home.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Charming poem, Jenish. I was delighted to see it published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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August 6, 2020 at 9:48 AM
I enjoyed reading the poem. It is an interesting piece of work. Keep it up.
Somadas Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 9:38 PM
Thank you Lekau for your delightful comment..
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 9:08 AM
Beautiful, best I have read in recent times.It reflects your beautiful personality. Am adding it to my favourites.
Somadas Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 9:40 PM
Thank you Rama for your delightful words..You made my day..
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 2:11 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Jenish. Blessings! :)
Somadas Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Thank you Aditi..
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July 13, 2020 at 10:00 PM
A lovely wish for compassion from a heart that sees the suffering of those around it, Jenish. Congratulations on your win my friend!
Somadas Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 11:49 PM
Thank you Sam for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:48 PM
Two-word comment, my friend: HUGE FAVE! Thanks! ~ Gershon Just divinely penned. Love, love, love it!
Somadas Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Gershon for the FAVE.. You made my day...
Watt Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 11:26 PM
Enchanting, Jenish! These words speak of a compassionate heart. Congratulations on your win ~ John
Somadas Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Thank you John for your kind support..
Chiri Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
Somadas Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Thank you Brenda..
Ibeh Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on winning first place with this wondrous, captivating write, Jenish:-) There's something magical about it!
Somadas Avatar
July 11, 2020 at 11:27 PM
Thank you Edward for your delightful words.. Have a great day..
Romios Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Really loved this Jenish. Panagiota xx
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:28 PM
Thank you Panagiota..
Pandit Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 6:35 AM
Beautiful poem, Jenish--and awesome sentiments!
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:28 PM
Thank you Vijay..
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July 9, 2020 at 5:15 AM
I wish to read such beautiful and uplifting poems every day my dearest friend, Jenish! Outstanding! Blessings!
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 11:28 PM
Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words..
Mishra Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Every words drenches me in tender velvet kindness Jenish. So reflective of your thoughts. Loved it :)
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 3:40 AM
Thank you Aditi for your kind support.. Have a great day..
Hawkins Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 1:13 AM
I wish to be a Poet that can write Poetry like that....... And shine like a cresset .... Thank you, Jenish, very lovely verse...
Somadas Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 1:20 AM
You made my day Shirley.. Thank you and God bless you..
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