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Actually, I do not wish to be this animal. I just wanted to do the limerick on him!

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I wish that I was a baboon to make all the lady apes swoon. On my chest I would pound. Then I’d strut all around, drop my pants, and show them my moon. For Viv Wigley's "I wish I was" Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/9/2018 10:45:00 PM
What a sight, LOL! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 5/8/2018 2:46:00 PM
LOL, that was funny - and I totally get why Viv woudl have thought this one is by Jan ;) Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/8/2018 11:51:00 AM
Andrea, this is so funny <3 Congratulations on your creative winning write. hugs
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:05:00 PM
This was a hoot! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 5/7/2018 12:46:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:56:00 AM
Congrats and thanks for entering my contest, Andrea. I drop my trousers in salute :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:20:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:09:00 AM
Oh wonderful, I missed this first time around Andrea! Love it. There’s sinethung irresistible about a baboon’s bum isn’t there! Oh no, sorry, I meant... horrible! Congrats on your win :-)
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Date: 5/7/2018 10:37:00 AM
Hahaha - you made me laugh out loud today! How utterly funny - love it, Andy! Congrats on you lovely win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:56:00 AM
Oh! Oh! Oh! What can I say? Words do not suffice! Hilarious!! Congrats! ~gw
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:56:00 AM
Oh! Oh! Oh! What can I say? Words do not suffice! Hilarious!! Congrats! ~gw
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:09:00 AM
I'm just coming back to say congratulations back to say congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/7/2018 7:59:00 AM
Hee hee ho ho into the faves we go! ;p Compngrats on your win !!! xomo :)
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:54:00 AM
Lol. Congratulations, Anndrea, on your win. This is so cute! Well done.
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Date: 5/7/2018 3:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Andrea, as usual.
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Date: 5/6/2018 12:05:00 PM
Great laughable limerick, Andrea!
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Date: 5/6/2018 8:12:00 AM
Great limerick, Andrea, it gave me a good laugh this morning. John
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Date: 5/5/2018 10:54:00 AM
What a charmer, Andrea.
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Date: 5/5/2018 9:58:00 AM
Lol! Andrea, Your limerick was hilarious. I enjoyed the photo too. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/5/2018 9:44:00 AM
Clever and witty.
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:19:00 AM
I love it! very witty indeed. Good luck in the contest, Andrea, all the best...Charlie
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Date: 5/5/2018 5:50:00 AM
Excellent Andrea..the picture says it all! A win for sure!!
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Date: 5/5/2018 3:05:00 AM
oh so clever Andrea wish I'd thought of this one - that final line is hilariarse lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/5/2018 2:04:00 AM
Great Lim Andrea, when I went to Kenya they were everywhere, yes, they ak have that prominent Moon ' lol. Good luck. Tom.
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