Hat Bueckert Poet Pantoum

I Wish Somebody Would'Ve Told Me

I wish somebody would’ve told me
Since reincarnating as a camel
It is not all it’s cracked up to be
Thought it would be fun to be this mammal

Since reincarnating as a camel
I’ve taken my fair share of lumps
Thought it would be fun to be this mammal
I spit too much and have these awkward humps

I’ve taken my fair share of lumps
It is not all it’s cracked up to be
I spit too much and have these awkward humps
I wish somebody would’ve told me

March 14, 2023
Pick-A-Title, Vol 35 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Edward Ibeh March 26, 2023 at 8:55 AM Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fabulous, humorous poem, Hat:-) Enjoyed. Hat Bueckert March 28, 2023 at 9:08 PM Thanks for hosting, always fun to see what pops up

Sotto Poet March 24, 2023 at 7:42 PM Hat, many hearty congratulations on your Contest win! Spotless vibes you portray. Hat Bueckert March 28, 2023 at 9:08 PM Thank you!

Daniel Turner March 14, 2023 at 5:46 PM This might be the funniest pantoum I have ever read, Hat. Very nice and very clever. Hat Bueckert March 14, 2023 at 9:30 PM Haha much appreciated, thank you