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I Wish I Were Beautiful

Oh, to be beautiful... The drop dead gorgeous type the let me revel in the hype that follows my cat walk stride kind Oh, to be beautiful... the beauty pageant kind the stop in your tracks and stare as I throw back my raven hair my hips swaying here and there the too good to be true kind Oh, to be beautiful... airport beauty section poster kind the stare if you dare kind the I'll steal your soul and make you crave kind I want to be beautiful I want to know what it's like to be adored with delight Oh, oh how I would revel in that light But.. I'm not beautiful I guess I have my little share, and I really shouldn't care about how I look or what I wear BEWARE!!! My poetry can cast a spell rosy word tinted illusions that make you see a beautiful enchantress in me Finally.... my wish come true I'm infinitely beautiful beautiful to you. Eileen Manassian

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/8/2024 1:56:00 PM

Aw, to me you're beautiful! :) Love how you stood for yourself at the ending stanza.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2024 10:23:00 AM

I have always found you beautiful and quite obviously have others. But I understand what you are saying here. I always had issues with my figure and not being built to have a wasp waistline. Great poem

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/9/2024 1:11:00 PM

I too have always felt inferior for weight. It's something that will always be part of feminine culture for those of us not born to be model thin

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 7:59:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Very kind of you. I have low self esteem due to my weight. Just want to know what it would be like to be so beautiful. One can wish and dream. Big hugs

Craig Cornish

Date: 6/2/2024 6:20:00 PM

What is beauty dear Eileen - in the eye of...God? Awesome to see your ink drip again!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 8:00:00 PM

Thanks, Craig. True. But one sometimes wishes for human compliments as well. Hope all is well. Blessings

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/2/2024 8:03:00 AM

Dear Eileen, I am struck by the soul-baring vulnerability, the yearning for physical beauty while finding your way to the self-empowering discovery of being a "beautiful enchantress" whose "poetry can cast a spell". I adore the turn, the change of tone at "BEWARE!!!" - so powerful and sets up your grand finale with a brilliant realization. I especially enjoyed "as I throw back my raven hair/my hips swaying here and there" - vibrant, vivid femininity! Superb and thought-provoking poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 8:02:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. I know it's very superficial of me, but I felt like letting it out. Your comment is very well received as you give an analysis of the poem itself. I'm grateful. Blessings

Paul Callus

Date: 6/2/2024 2:54:00 AM

Wanting to look beautiful/attractive is probably every woman's wish; it helps with self-confidence, especially each time they look in a mirror! I am glad that we met face to face, and the "enchantress " in you definitely had her say :) ~ Big hugs my friend // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 8:04:00 PM

I'll never forget those days in Malta. They are engraved in my heart. Thank you for the memories. Poetry is a great outlet. It let's me dream and get out of the depression I find myself in. Blessings

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/1/2024 10:00:00 PM

Oh if you were a gracious Siamese cat :) My, my.And they say beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Pity I don't have a real picture of you :) I don't trust avatars. Alas at my old age I stopped thinking of beautiful women. Might get a heart attack -)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 8:12:00 PM

You make me smile. Avatars are deceptive if you have filters on. I have low self confidence due to my weight. That's why I'd love to know what it's like to have it all... brains; personality, and a knock out figure. But I'll never know. When I was younger...I was considered sexy. This by the admission of a friend in a game of truth or dare who said all the guys in his friends group thought so. I was happy to know that as he's very popular with the ladies. Others have said the same. Though i still get the compliment or two... those days are gone. No heart attacks on account of me ;)

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/1/2024 9:40:00 AM

How the world goes round & round. I am so, so happy to see lines from you again. I relate to this, particularly as a Man, in that disconnect...hoping to be interesting enough to be noticed, valued & ultimately respected. It is incredibly refreshing to read your work again.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 8:15:00 PM

I'm glad I was going through my older writes. Seeing a comment of yours I decided to look you up. Plus start here. Don't go MIA again, you hear? Thanks for the comment. Big hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2024 5:39:00 AM

Your beauty and talent shine through.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 10:15:00 PM

Awwwwwww.... thanks, Rick. Your support means so much to me. Big hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/28/2024 8:22:00 AM

Dear Eileen, Absolutely captivating! The imagery and raw honesty drew me in completely. You skillfully conveyed the yearning for beauty while highlighting the deeper, enchanting allure of your words. The ending was especially poignant, celebrating inner beauty. Your talent is truly spellbinding. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 10:16:00 PM

Thank you for this kind review is my poem. Much appreciated. Poetry let's me dream and imagine and thrive. I don't know what I would do without it. Blessings.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/28/2024 1:41:00 AM

This reminds me a tale you might know of Layla and Majnu'n :) hope you smile!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/27/2024 12:14:00 AM

If I made you smile, then even in sadness I will smile.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2024 10:17:00 PM

We are all majnu'n at some point. Majnu'n for love and appreciation. Thank you, dear. A smile is precious.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/27/2024 7:17:00 PM

Good to read your poetry again, Eileen! You are a talented poet and beautiful to God! But I know what you mean…to be beautiful for a day would be something to experience! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2024 11:28:00 PM

Thanks, Laura. I know that. Some people seem to have it all: inner and outer beauty. Wish I were one of them. ;) Have a lovely day.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/27/2024 4:39:00 PM

Yes, we're all beautiful to someone, or at least we should be. Well written

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2024 11:28:00 PM

I have always admired beauty. I know when God created Adam and Even, they must have been stunning. God is the author of beauty. Yes, we are told that our beauty should be the inner one. I am fully cognizant of that, but oh....How I wish I had both! ;) Can't blame a girl for wishing. That ending was just to make myself feel better. It's true that when we get to know someone and appreciate them, they look beautiful to us. Thanks for stopping by.