Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Rhyme

I Wish I Was a Tortoise

A stubborn old Taurus
I wish I was a tortoise

To live life at a reasonable pace

But more on topic
I'm agoraphobic

I could go out never leaving my place





05.05.18

Viv Wigley
I wish I was a - Poetry Contest

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 10, 2018 at 5:56 PM Hello Maureen, I like your poem , it is so cute. Have a nice evening my friend. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 10, 2018 at 9:54 PM Thank you for your lovely visit Darlene, delighted you enjoyed my stab at humour ;) a lovely evening to you! xomo

Charlie Knowlton May 29, 2018 at 2:41 PM Love this poem Maureen, but you really need to come out of your shell. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 10, 2018 at 9:52 PM LOL! Don't I know it ;p xomo!

Rico Leffanta May 28, 2018 at 2:15 PM Very clever, indeed! Bonne chance! Aloha! Rico

Mick Talbot May 26, 2018 at 6:01 AM Yes very clever! Mick Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 26, 2018 at 8:53 AM Thankya! ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich May 7, 2018 at 5:42 PM oh this was clever, Maureen. I adore Taurus souls!! I am nearly one for my moon sign!! (my sun is Virgo though). Many of my good friends are Taurus! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 8, 2018 at 7:34 AM Thank you Andrea! A stubborn bunch? ;) xomo!

Gershon Wolf May 6, 2018 at 4:50 PM Insanely clever, M.M. A winner in my book. (I had to laugh: I'm a tortoise without being agoraphobic). :) gw Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 10:15 PM Giggles :) Thank you Gershon! xomo!

Joseph May May 6, 2018 at 1:22 PM Nice ending Maureen..Best wishes Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 10:14 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Constance La France May 6, 2018 at 10:11 AM Maureen, this is so sweet, yes me too, I would make a great tortouise Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 11:59 AM It surprised me when this contest made me really think about it, always wanting to fly n'all, who'd a knew the falcon would be bested ;)

Eileen Manassian May 6, 2018 at 4:21 AM How adorably cute. I must be agoraphobic too, then...if that's the definition. :) Hugs, dear. Good luck! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:49 AM Giggles, we must muster our tortoise spirit <3 Thank you lovely! xomo :)

Arturo Michael May 5, 2018 at 8:41 PM A bull am I too...reading you clearly...All the best Maureen Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:40 AM Ooh! Then Happy Birthday Season to you! Thank you Arturo :) xomo!

Tom Cunningham May 5, 2018 at 4:12 PM I think we all need to slow down sometimes. Like the go out without going out , Good luck. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:39 AM Absolutely, and home, don't leave home without it! LOL ;) Thank you Tom! xomo

Ilene Bauer May 5, 2018 at 3:32 PM ha! this is great, maureen! best of luck in the contest... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:37 AM Thank you Ilene! I wasn't sure it how it was going to go when I started looking for rhymes for agoraphobia and tortoise ;) xomo!

Heidi Sands May 5, 2018 at 2:50 PM Great one Maureen! I love it. Good luck in the contest :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:34 AM Thank you Heidi :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2018 at 10:48 AM LOL! A winner! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:32 AM Thank You!! It was too much fun ;) xomo!

Line Gauthier May 5, 2018 at 10:39 AM Maureen - this is awesome. So adorable. Love it. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:30 AM Thank you Line! I'm really tickled by how it came together :) Cheers lovely! xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis May 5, 2018 at 10:08 AM Socrates never traveled outside Athens but in war and still became Socrates we know! Haha! Good luck my friend, Maureen! Enjoy life at your wise pace! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:27 AM Giggles, mo speed it is! Thank you dear :) xomo!

Jan Allison May 5, 2018 at 10:01 AM oh so cute and funny Mo:-) hugs jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2018 at 5:25 AM Thankya :) xomo!!

Mike Gentile May 5, 2018 at 7:55 AM Love it Maureen, especially the "reasonable pace" xxoo Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 5, 2018 at 7:58 AM It'd be so nice ;p Thank You! xomo