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I Wish I Was a Tortoise

A stubborn old Taurus
I wish I was a tortoise

To live life at a reasonable pace

But more on topic
I'm agoraphobic

I could go out never leaving my place





05.05.18

Viv Wigley
I wish I was a - Poetry Contest

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/10/2018 5:56:00 PM Hello Maureen, I like your poem , it is so cute. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/10/2018 9:54:00 PM Thank you for your lovely visit Darlene, delighted you enjoyed my stab at humour ;) a lovely evening to you! xomo

Charlie Knowlton Date: 5/29/2018 2:41:00 PM Love this poem Maureen, but you really need to come out of your shell. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 6/10/2018 9:52:00 PM LOL! Don't I know it ;p xomo!

Rico Leffanta Date: 5/28/2018 2:15:00 PM Very clever, indeed! Bonne chance! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply

Mick Talbot Date: 5/26/2018 6:01:00 AM Yes very clever! Mick Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/26/2018 8:53:00 AM Thankya! ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/7/2018 5:42:00 PM oh this was clever, Maureen. I adore Taurus souls!! I am nearly one for my moon sign!! (my sun is Virgo though). Many of my good friends are Taurus! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/8/2018 7:34:00 AM Thank you Andrea! A stubborn bunch? ;) xomo!

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/6/2018 4:50:00 PM Insanely clever, M.M. A winner in my book. (I had to laugh: I'm a tortoise without being agoraphobic). :) gw Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 10:15:00 PM Giggles :) Thank you Gershon! xomo!

Joseph May Date: 5/6/2018 1:22:00 PM Nice ending Maureen..Best wishes Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 10:14:00 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Constance La France Date: 5/6/2018 10:11:00 AM Maureen, this is so sweet, yes me too, I would make a great tortouise Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 11:59:00 AM It surprised me when this contest made me really think about it, always wanting to fly n'all, who'd a knew the falcon would be bested ;)

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/6/2018 4:21:00 AM How adorably cute. I must be agoraphobic too, then...if that's the definition. :) Hugs, dear. Good luck! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:49:00 AM Giggles, we must muster our tortoise spirit <3 Thank you lovely! xomo :)

Arturo Michael Date: 5/5/2018 8:41:00 PM A bull am I too...reading you clearly...All the best Maureen Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:40:00 AM Ooh! Then Happy Birthday Season to you! Thank you Arturo :) xomo!

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/5/2018 4:12:00 PM I think we all need to slow down sometimes. Like the go out without going out , Good luck. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:39:00 AM Absolutely, and home, don't leave home without it! LOL ;) Thank you Tom! xomo

Ilene Bauer Date: 5/5/2018 3:32:00 PM ha! this is great, maureen! best of luck in the contest... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:37:00 AM Thank you Ilene! I wasn't sure it how it was going to go when I started looking for rhymes for agoraphobia and tortoise ;) xomo!

Heidi Sands Date: 5/5/2018 2:50:00 PM Great one Maureen! I love it. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:34:00 AM Thank you Heidi :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/5/2018 10:48:00 AM LOL! A winner! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:32:00 AM Thank You!! It was too much fun ;) xomo!

Line Gauthier Date: 5/5/2018 10:39:00 AM Maureen - this is awesome. So adorable. Love it. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:30:00 AM Thank you Line! I'm really tickled by how it came together :) Cheers lovely! xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/5/2018 10:08:00 AM Socrates never traveled outside Athens but in war and still became Socrates we know! Haha! Good luck my friend, Maureen! Enjoy life at your wise pace! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:27:00 AM Giggles, mo speed it is! Thank you dear :) xomo!

Jan Allison Date: 5/5/2018 10:01:00 AM oh so cute and funny Mo:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/6/2018 5:25:00 AM Thankya :) xomo!!

Mike Gentile Date: 5/5/2018 7:55:00 AM Love it Maureen, especially the "reasonable pace" xxoo Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/5/2018 7:58:00 AM It'd be so nice ;p Thank You! xomo