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Poetry/Quatern/I Wish I Had
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1630-150-16
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 16, 2024 
For the International  Contest, I Wish I Had
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 04/08/2024

Second Place

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"The ego within forced me to resist, But now I wish I had effused a love mist, With aplomb and flair, just kind of left it there, For self-aware souls passing by, who choose to pair." Line of Inquiry_ Unseeking Seeker When my true love died this heart broke, I withdrew from life and all love; and from his grave my true love spoke, in dreams came from heaven above. Many times I could have loved but, when my true love died this heart broke; ''I wish I had'' this love bond cut, spending life under a dark cloak. When meeting a man I just choke, wishing I could take that first step ... when my true love died this heart broke, and for new love lost I have wept. But, then I found the courage- strength, though in the dark night my tears soak; will keep new love- give up lament ... when my true love died this heart broke.

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Date: 3/18/2024 1:56:00 AM
Must remember to see this complete.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2024 6:46:00 PM
Victor, thank you for the visit, hope you can return now my poem is completed, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/17/2024 8:03:00 AM
With indepth and essence a wonderful one with tender personal touch. Regards
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2024 6:47:00 PM
Silpika, thank you for the compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/17/2024 1:37:00 AM
I love it already!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/18/2024 6:47:00 PM
Bj, thank you so much for the compliment, hugs, Constance

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