I Wish I Could Fly

When everything threatens my very existence  
         I question my strength and will I go the distance
With every new phone call, with every new text
                     I wonder what crisis I’ll learn about next

My mother has fallen, my niece has the flu
           My dog’s had a seizure, my head’s lost a screw
My mama is dizzy, concussion is feared
                    Anxiety rushes, a breakdown has neared

The job front is shaky, the bills mounting high
                         I so want to give up, I wish I could fly
Away then, away where I’ll never be found
        And then, only then will my feet touch the ground  

But that isn’t living and that isn’t life
               And everyone suffers their fair share of strife
So onward I go as I center myself
         And count all my blessings, I still have my health 

Oh wait, there’s a message, results are now in
                         The latest biopsy from broken out skin
A rare skin disorder, a million to one
               We’re sorry, no cure and now ain’t we got fun
 
I’m walking on eggshells, if walking at all
                With every step thinking on this one,  I’ll fall
And yet, something moves me, I’m not going to cry
                But then, once again, I  sure wish I could fly

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Date: 7/11/2024 5:01:00 AM
Excellent poem Mike. Well expressed. I admire your positivity. Life is full of obstacles for sure and we must count our blessings daily. I have often wanted to fly away in life. Take care. Happy Thursday!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/12/2024 4:47:00 AM
Thank you Heidi xxoo
Date: 6/30/2024 6:08:00 AM
This is one of the most relatable pieces I have ever read. There were times in my life when I too wished I could just fly away into a strange, beautiful land where no one would find me, where I could find peace instead. "I’m walking on eggshells, if walking at all" this hit quite hard for me. "But that isn’t living and that isn’t life" so, so very true. very beautiful poem and even if there is no cure, i hope you find one Mike. i really hope and pray that you do. hugs and much love, Hiba.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/1/2024 6:13:00 PM
Hiba, thank you so much, I am so glad it resonated with you! I really appreciate your kind words!!!
Date: 6/24/2024 2:25:00 AM
We all have our illnesses to contend with. The older we grow, the more the ailments. We have the same feelings though.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/24/2024 4:22:00 AM
So very true Victor!! Happy Monday!!
Date: 6/22/2024 3:58:00 PM
Sometimes it's difficult to look at all the blessings, when you're surrounded by so many obstacles. Always stay focused on the positive and when the time is right, a rainbow will caress the sky. Your thoughts touch my heart. Happy Saturday, Mike. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2024 3:59:00 PM
Thank you Brandy and yes, I am a very positive person and I know all will be well xxoo
Date: 6/22/2024 1:49:00 PM
Mike l am assuming and hoping this is fiction! A wonderfully written poem about the life and how hard it can be at times and wanting to just fly away!! I get that….Debx
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Date: 6/22/2024 4:34:00 PM
Oh Mike l am truly sorry you are having such a hard time atm. Sorry to hear about your skin disorder, your job, your mum l know how much she means to you, and your dog having a seizure. That is a lot to deal with at one time. Life never deals the ups and downs evenly in life they seem to come in clumps! My mums saying was ‘Everything passes’ which is true….l try and hold on to that through hard times which is not always easy! There will be better days ahead even though it doesn’t feel like it presently. Take care Mike and cuddles galore being sent! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2024 3:58:00 PM
Aww, you are so sweet Deb! Unfortunately, every word is true! But better days to come!!!! Thank you xxoo
Date: 6/22/2024 8:15:00 AM
A deep and emotive poem that poem poignantly captures the overwhelming weight of life's adversities, painting a vivid picture of the narrator's struggles. The poet adeptly uses rhythm and rhyme to convey a sense of relentless pressure, reflecting the constant barrage of bad news and personal crises.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/22/2024 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!!
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