I Wish I Could

Share in your joys, Stay if I should, Lessen your sorrows, I wish I could. Stand by your side, Smile if I would, Hold your hand, I wish I could. You in my arms, I'll die if I should, Kiss away your tears, I wish I could. Live all your dreams, Achieve if I would, Be your shining light, I wish I could. See you smile, Be the reason if I should, Laugh with your laughter, I wish I could. Give you my love, All if I would, Have your's back, I wish I could. Never let you go, Promise if I should, Say it all to you, I wish I could.

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Date: 4/27/2017 7:20:00 AM
I like how you worked with your refrain line, Shubham. Nice work.
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/28/2017 3:21:00 AM
Thanks a lot Agnes!! :) much appreciated :)
Date: 4/25/2017 5:14:00 PM
Dear Shubham. Good Evening. I found this most beautiful and touching. Who would not want to receive these words from the one they love and from the one who loves them. Wonderful in every way completely and entirely.
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/26/2017 4:35:00 AM
I'm glad that you find it touching, lisa!! Thanks a lot for your comment. You are so kind. :) really appreciate your visit. Shubham
Date: 4/25/2017 2:51:00 PM
Shubham, a wonderful rhyme and I really liked those repeating lines
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/26/2017 4:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot BW :) Your visit and comment mean a lot to me. !! Shubham
Date: 4/20/2017 6:24:00 AM
When mutual love is there all is possible my dear friend, Shubham! Wonderful poem! A 7!
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Shubham Kamble
Date: 4/20/2017 2:43:00 PM
Yes, it's got to be. :) Thank you Demetrios for your visit and comment. I really Appreciate it. And thanks a lot for the 7 :) shubham
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