Eleanore Bourner Poet Concrete

I Wish For You

a                                                        I
                                                   hope that
                                                   you will fly
                                                    high like
                                                      a bird.
                                                  soaring above
                                             the clouds, high in the 
                                        air. triumphant over alll your 
                                   troubles. i    hope that      you shall
                             always find      your way to     where you 
                            must go, and     that you can   be who you 
                          wish to               be. i shall pra        y for you 
                                                    every day.
                                                      i hope 
                                                        that
                                                    you will fly
                                                  high  like   a
                                               bird.    over  com
                                              ing      all ob   sticles
                                           in you    r way.     i will
                                        do all       of this     because
                                          i              love         you

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Karen Da August 19, 2018 at 2:09 AM I would love to be the recipient of this wish. Very nicely created..

Poet Destroyer A April 4, 2016 at 12:12 AM wow, great shape. LINDA

Lynette Chachere January 30, 2010 at 1:25 PM This is an amazing write you have.you have a beautiful heart and a great artist too.And thank you so much for your words, i am glad you like my poems so much.i get worried at times, so your comments mean a lot to me.i will write more.heh. -Always Lynette

Raul Moreno November 30, 2009 at 10:12 PM Eleanore, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2009 at 1:18 PM Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Eleanore. Love,Carol

James Fraser November 30, 2009 at 11:00 AM Eleanore, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest >> James

Donna Golden November 29, 2009 at 6:07 PM Wonderful piece, Eleanore! Congrats on your success in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna

James Fraser November 15, 2009 at 7:18 AM Excellent piece and the artwork in incredible >> James

Debbie Guzzi November 14, 2009 at 2:37 PM Thanks so much for the entry! Love Soars as a title would make it more a concrete verse and less a shaped verse. PS if you put a . at the beginning of the line you can push you "I" over to the top of the birds head ;) Light & Love

Brandon W November 9, 2009 at 7:19 PM Very nice, i like this

Michelle Pryor November 7, 2009 at 3:04 PM i can never do this..;)...nice and very creative

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2009 at 5:22 AM Beautiful thoughts put to pen plus added bonus of the design. Those designs are very difficult to do. Keep designing and writing. Sara

October 29, 2009 at 2:46 PM Uplifting poem. Wonderful visual effect. If you entered the contest with this creative poem, best wishes. Keep up the good writing. Much can be accomplished through prayer. Blessings, Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown October 24, 2009 at 6:55 AM I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Eleanore. I look forward to reading more of it. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol

Doris Culverhouse October 23, 2009 at 7:26 PM nice image and poem. good job.