I Wish For You

a                                                        I
                                                   hope that
                                                   you will fly
                                                    high like
                                                      a bird.
                                                  soaring above
                                             the clouds, high in the 
                                        air. triumphant over alll your 
                                   troubles. i    hope that      you shall
                             always find      your way to     where you 
                            must go, and     that you can   be who you 
                          wish to               be. i shall pra        y for you 
                                                    every day.
                                                      i hope 
                                                        that
                                                    you will fly
                                                  high  like   a
                                               bird.    over  com
                                              ing      all ob   sticles
                                           in you    r way.     i will
                                        do all       of this     because
                                          i              love         you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/19/2018 2:09:00 AM
I would love to be the recipient of this wish. Very nicely created..
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:12:00 AM
wow, great shape. LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2010 1:25:00 PM
This is an amazing write you have.you have a beautiful heart and a great artist too.And thank you so much for your words, i am glad you like my poems so much.i get worried at times, so your comments mean a lot to me.i will write more.heh. -Always Lynette
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Date: 11/30/2009 10:12:00 PM
Eleanore, congrats on your success in Deborah's contest...Raul
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Eleanore. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 11:00:00 AM
Eleanore, many congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest >> James
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:07:00 PM
Wonderful piece, Eleanore! Congrats on your success in Deborah's contest! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/15/2009 7:18:00 AM
Excellent piece and the artwork in incredible >> James
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Date: 11/14/2009 2:37:00 PM
Thanks so much for the entry! Love Soars as a title would make it more a concrete verse and less a shaped verse. PS if you put a . at the beginning of the line you can push you "I" over to the top of the birds head ;) Light & Love
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Date: 11/9/2009 7:19:00 PM
Very nice, i like this
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:04:00 PM
i can never do this..;)...nice and very creative
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:22:00 AM
Beautiful thoughts put to pen plus added bonus of the design. Those designs are very difficult to do. Keep designing and writing. Sara
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Date: 10/29/2009 2:46:00 PM
Uplifting poem. Wonderful visual effect. If you entered the contest with this creative poem, best wishes. Keep up the good writing. Much can be accomplished through prayer. Blessings, Karen
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Eleanore. I look forward to reading more of it. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol
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Date: 10/23/2009 7:26:00 PM
nice image and poem. good job.
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