Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

I Wish

I wish I could be by your side, without you knowing.
I wish I could be the wind that touched you, without
you seeing me. I wish I was close to your heart and
there you could feel me.

I wish I was water and you could drink me and go 
inside of you, without you knowing. I wish I was the 
sun that comes through your window, every morning
and wake you up with a caress and a kiss on your face.

I wish I was the wind that forms a hurricane and take 
you with me, real far away. I wish I was a bird of a very
special kind and be able to fly and be by your side.

All these things,  I wish to be, but they are fantasies
that can not be. I wish I knew, if deep in your mind, you
still remember me from time to time, or you forgot me 
little by little as time went by... 

Copyright:  For fantasy contest
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Robin Davis September 20, 2013 at 9:39 AM lovely and emotional words of love and devotion. the reader can feel the sentiment and caring in each line. nice job

Sean L Sanders January 30, 2013 at 9:18 AM Very touching excellent poem written by a very good poet. I saw that you view another poet named Margherita Russo she's only 14 and I know it would mean alot for her to have you read her newest poem if you have the time. Thank you very much.

Poet Destroyer A January 26, 2013 at 5:02 PM Lucilla, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA

Debbie Guzzi January 24, 2013 at 2:51 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve January 24, 2013 at 12:53 PM Congrats on your win. A very creative write. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carol Eastman January 24, 2013 at 12:10 PM Touching and sad. Congrats on the win.

Debra Squyres January 24, 2013 at 11:19 AM Enjoyed the read once more...and congratulations on your win !!

Heather Ober January 24, 2013 at 9:58 AM Oh my goodness, this is beautiful and so full of yearning. Really enjoyed reading this one! Congrats!

Phyllis Babcock January 24, 2013 at 9:23 AM I love this romantic wishful poem. An excellent write. love phyl

S.Jagathsimhan Nair January 17, 2013 at 9:48 PM A wonderfully romantic write is this one, Lucilla,!! Jag

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2013 at 5:46 PM Ahh!!The romantic heart has written some great passion into this work...Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for your stop by my work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2013 at 4:07 PM Ah a true to life fantasy! Light & Love

Mohammad Yamin January 17, 2013 at 9:35 AM A fantastic fantacy. I like it. I wish you a win in the contest. Thanks for your appreciation of my Tanka Kiss of Death, Lucilla. I am grateful. -Mohammad

Poet Destroyer A January 16, 2013 at 9:20 PM Hi Lucy, a hard feeling not knowing if you still exist in the mind of the one who still rains upon your stars.... a very lovely and sad feeling... good luck in the contest..pd

Toquyen Harrell January 16, 2013 at 3:19 PM Beautiful fantasies! Lovely, Lucilla. Enjoyed! Good luck :)

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2013 at 2:55 PM wonderful poem for the fantasy contest. Wish I had thought of this!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2013 at 11:41 AM Romantic wishes and dreams Lucilla. - Beautiful poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres January 16, 2013 at 11:00 AM To be smitten is lovely, till it leaves your life. Tender heartfelt words you have penned here.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 16, 2013 at 10:38 AM This is a lovely fantasy Lucilla luv xx

Demetrios Trifiatis January 16, 2013 at 6:32 AM I wish I were the ONE you have… wished for! Charming, full of sentiments and honesty! Good luck with the ONE! Thank you!

Russell Sivey January 16, 2013 at 4:01 AM Though it may be a long time passing since you've met this man, but I guarantee that he remembers you! All your kindness and passion that you feel here isn't easily forgotten! With each sundrop and each piece of the wind that he feels he knows its you my friend, I know that he knows...just as you remember him, so he remembers you! Memories last forever Lucilla, especially the good ones! This is an excellent write, I enjoyed reading it immensely! Thank you for sharing it today! Awesome Work!!

Robert Pettit January 15, 2013 at 10:00 PM Life is full of such nice wishes. You have described everything well here.

Lemonia Sims January 15, 2013 at 4:19 PM deep feelings and serene very pretty

Michael Smith January 15, 2013 at 3:41 PM This stirs feelings within... "Hey, Honey come quickly"!! (He yells to his wife in need of passions quelled.)